News stories on TV and in newspaper are very often accompanied by pictures.
Some people say that these picture are more effective than words.
What is your opinion about this?
In my opinion images with the newspaper article or story and on television is more impactful than words. In today's world there is no time to read whole story, in this case pictures tells brief about the message writer wantsbto convey.
Firstly, people have very less time to devote on newspaper,so, they briefly scan newspaper through pictures and as maxim goes 'pictures tell more than story'. However, in case of television pictures are important part of the story,as, There is nonstory without image.
Further, Images are very helpful in describing story, Infact, some stories of wars are mainly written against a picture on the other hand newspaper images are put to complete the story. For example, In recent picture of boy died on shore after fleeing feom wor torn syria goes viral and many stories written on it and we have many hours of debate on newschannel, which , shows the impact of image in story.
We have another example from Iraq, where 'white helmet' saves life of many people and people all over the globe talked about it only because of image. Which spread like an epidemic and tells its own story.
To conclude, above example clearly state effectiveness of pictures on story and we can clearly say that story is incomplete without image.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, first, firstly, however, if, so, for example, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91588785047 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33071062264 2.80592935109 83% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616822429907 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3994615729 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.888888889 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7777777778 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233785825487 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0976788679902 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705690143121 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13231957594 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563941986857 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.