The pie chart represents percentage wise the areas which should be banned from smoking. The graph illustrates a peoples poll for eight different sectors which should be smokeless.
Overall, people think that workplace should be banned most, followed by restaurants and shopping malls due to the inconvenence. However, pubs, bus stops teachers lounges are acceptable with minimal ban on these areas compared to the other localities.
About 21% think that workplace should smoke free, followed by 19% and 18% of individuals who want resaurants and shopping malls to be banned from smoking respectively. Whereas, beaches and public trasnports according to around 13% and 11% people should be smoke free. The least areas smoking is acceptable are pubs, bus stops, teachers lounges and public transport polling about 3%,8%, 7% and 11% of the individuals respectively.
To conclude, the society is trying to opine workplace as smokeless sector to a much larger level, than places where smoking has been acceptable which includes pubs and beaches.
- the table below shows how young people in Tokyo Japan listened to music over the previous month The pie chart shows a record company s international findings about whether people preferred live or recorded 87
- Recent years, the number of crimes committed by young people in major cities throughout the world has been increasing. Why this has happened and how to deal with this problem? 89
- The graph shows Underground Station Passenger Numbers in London. 73
- With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a complete waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. 78
- Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study part or all of theirs courses in foreign countries While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students it also has a number of disadvantages Do you agree or disagree 92
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 163.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49079754601 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73571483287 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61963190184 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.2368395008 43.030603864 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.875 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.375 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302527834393 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135213642198 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0559102429041 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169121065915 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618505760857 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.