your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/flat
write a letter to your neighbors. in your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologize
describe what action will you take
Dear Mohammad,
I was shocked to hear about your discomfort due to noises from my flat. Frankly, I had no idea that sounds made in my house would get to yours. I am terribly sorry for your suffering.
As you may know, my family paid me a visit after so many time. One of the entourage was my niece who is only 3 years old. Although I did my best to control him not to make too much noise, he obviously did not listen at all and made a mess out of my home along making so much noises all the time.
My family went back to Mashhad, though, and you will not be bothered by any sound from my flat. If you let me, I will buy you a drink from the bar, thus not only will I enjoy the company of a great neighbor, but I get you a peace offering because of all the disturbances.
Again, I am terribly sorry and please accept my apologies.
Yours Sincerely,
Aidin Farughi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...now, my family paid me a visit after so many time. One of the entourage was my niece who ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...e a mess out of my home along making so much noises all the time. My family went ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, frankly, if, may, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11046511628 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2346994939 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645348837209 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 221.4 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1403157447 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211063256423 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928127931455 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824170370217 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10848441486 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0964901586827 0.0580467560999 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.26 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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