Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some psychologists say, an individual 's personality and nature can be judged by their way of wearing the clothes. On the other hand, rest of the people disagree, because they point out the clothes they wear, depend upon on the occasion. I also agree with the latter statement.
Firstly, in some countries their are rules and regulations for the clothes, the masses have to wear it, for instance, in muslim nation, the woman's have to wear 'Burkha', which is not their favourable wearing, but they have to, because it is in their custom, so no one can deny it. That's why it is not possible to analyze the character and culture from the wearing style. Secondly, in the multinational companies, all the employees have to wear the same kind of uniform, with similar colors, and also in schools , folks are dressed in same kind of uniform. So no one can comment on their identity and they way they behave in the society.
In addition to this, people generally choose the outfit in relation to the occassion, where he or she is going to attend. For exaple, in any traditional festival, human beings will dress according to specific festival and every carnival has its own particular dress. So, it would be impossible to judge someone from choice of clothes he or she would pick.
In conclusion, after careful consideration, I believe that people's choice of clothes will illustrate their character, only if they are free to wear anything they want, not enforced by laws, working areas and schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: there
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...with similar colors, and also in schools , folks are dressed in same kind of unifo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1239.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82101167315 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61452137339 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607003891051 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2937418691 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.636363636 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170684020827 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674527235651 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609425349375 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976524932471 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393448983313 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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