You work for an international company.you have seen an advertisment for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager' in your letter.
-describe the training course you want to do
-expalin what company could do to help you
-say how the course will be useful for your job.
Dear Sir
I am writing in connection with the advertisment i saw on intranet site of our company for executive managment course at IIM Kolkata.
As you aware this programme includes managmemt course,which covers most of our Quality managment subjects.
Requesting you to support me on this by sparing me for a month to join physical classes at Kolkata and also as you aware, am very jounior employee and munpay scale is not enough to cover the expense of training by myself, So kindly support me to provide me company loan for the same.
Quality managment course will help me to build confidanve in me and will also support me to take next rile.
In the end, I would like to see positive response by your end.
Thanking you
Yours faithfully 5th March 2018
Anand Dixit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...end. Thanking you Yours faithfully 5th March 2018 Anand Dixit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 658.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 136.0 206.0 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83823529412 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.41495297035 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58183533604 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 127.690721649 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.669117647059 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 200.7 290.88556701 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0347138538 44.8134815571 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 4.34317383033 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237890627996 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107482891374 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0304550713276 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100604604436 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288650687996 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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