You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say – What and when did you borrow? – What happened to it? Why? – What do you suggest to do about it?
Dear Jack,
I hope this letter finds you well. Thanks so much for lending some CDs and a video camera for Jonathan’s birthday party. I appreciate your altruistic behavior for giving me your expensive gadget.
I wish you were here. It was a blast. I ‘m sorry to say that one of the CDs that you had borrowed lent me was completely damaged by my relatives’ children that are too much hyperactive. Unfortunately, they had damaged not only my personal belongings such as classic cassettes, but also your “happy birthday songs” album. Its frame was totally broken and the whole of the surface of the CD was badly scratched. Please accept my apologies for what has happened. Please inform me about the way of compensation.
If you like, I‘ll buy a new one or pay the price of the original album. Please do not hesitate to call me about this matter. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Carl Whitley
- The advantages brought by the spread of English as a "global language" will outweigh the disadvantages. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view? 56
- You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say – What and when did you borrow? – What happened to it? Why? – What do you suggest to do about it? 73
- You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say – What and when did you borrow? – What happened to it? Why?– What do you suggest to do about it? 73
- You have borrowed something from your friend for a party and unfortunately it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend to apologise and say – What and when did you borrow? – What happened to it? Why? – What do you suggest to do about it? 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Jack, I hope this letter finds you well. Thank...
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Line 5, column 241, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'belongings'.
Suggestion: belongings
...rtunately, they had damaged not only my personal belongings such as classic cassettes, but also you...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Carl Whitley
^^^^^
Line 11, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u soon. Best wishes, Carl Whitley
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 801.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88414634146 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85924900595 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.69512195122 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6262833392 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.2142857143 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7142857143 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24226210958 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755108564419 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407274167108 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158771823283 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00778129095169 0.0580467560999 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.84 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.