Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring to your notice about the malfunction of few button on the monitor that I had purchased from your store and how it’s impacting my daily work
I was fine working with monitor for few days. Later, i realized that I need to change the brightness settings in order to avoid eye fatigue. Upon checking the button’s on the monitor to adjust the brightness, i that the buttons were irresponsive.
I do all of my work from home, this requires me to spend around eight to ten hours of my time with the computer. Unable to change the setting , i had to break for 15 minutes for every 1 hour of work. On an average my productivity has been reduced by 2 hours a day.
So, i request you to send a technicion and have my monitor throughly checked. If it is to be found defective and would take some time to get it repared, please do provide me with a temporary resource.If it cannot be repared. I want to let you know that the device is still under warrenty, kindly replace with new one.
Ihope that my problems with the device will be resolved soon.
Yours faithfully,
Kartheek
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ting my daily work I was fine working with monitor for few days. Later, i real...
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...king with monitor for few days. Later, i realized that I need to change the brig...
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...e computer. Unable to change the setting , i had to break for 15 minutes for every...
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...omputer. Unable to change the setting , i had to break for 15 minutes for every 1...
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...average my productivity has been reduced by 2 hours a day. So, i request you t...
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...do provide me with a temporary resource.If it cannot be repared. I want to let you...
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...do provide me with a temporary resource.If it cannot be repared. I want to let you...
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...ved soon. Yours faithfully, Kartheek
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4976076555 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5924012455 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641148325359 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3695324521 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4545454545 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199000162169 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065718054128 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523980763269 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102196506654 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0335963769243 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.