Some people believe that the sole aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss.
Few individuals are of the view that the primary goal of tertiary education is to prepare people for work. To a large extent, I agree with this statement because if the youth of the country will be educated, only then they will be able to get better jobs. This essay will discuss points to support my opinion.
On the one hand, many people believe that university studies give more extensive benefits to their students besides the career purpose. Firstly education is required for character development. Even if the person has a degree, it will not ensure him or her safe profession unless he or she has developed their character. If a person is adequately groomed, only then they will be able to place themselves in a professional setting. For instance, if a candidate appears in an interview, the interviewees not only check their academic qualification but also check if the person is capable enough to adapt himself to a new setting.
On the other hand, there are numerous reasons which support the ideology that university education is only aimed at making graduates ready for jobs. Firstly, if the university students will be well-qualified, they will get much better jobs in Multinational Companies – entrance to which is tough. Secondly, having a degree does not guarantee a job, but one of the prerequisites that are essential to apply for a job is having some or the other kind of professional degree.
Furthermore, attaining university education provides a broad spectrum of selection for the students. If they have only school qualification, they have fewer job opportunities. Whereas, if they have a tertiary education, the possibilities for various professions open up and they can choose the field in which they want to pursue their career.
In conclusion, although higher education provides added benefits to the graduates, its major purpose is to make the youth ready for attaining job occupations. Students should acquire education so that they can have an independent and well-settled life in their future.
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- Some people believe that the sole aim of higher education is to make people ready for employment. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Discuss. 77
- A recent study has shown that over 50% of school children cannot write legibly. The researchers concluded that the widespread use of smartphones, tablets and computers by children from as young as 12 months old was to blame. We are now living in a “post 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'schooled'.
Suggestion: schooled
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 20.9802955665 148% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1207.87684729 141% => OK
No of words: 333.0 242.827586207 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12612612613 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97131934476 2.71678728327 109% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543543543544 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 379.143842365 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.71428571429 408% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3779023725 50.4703680194 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6875 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8125 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4375 7.25397266985 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167483511531 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585329040586 0.0925447433944 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054450792773 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948295330557 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324429124817 0.0609392437508 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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