LIVING in a large city
On logical ground, there is no compelling reason to argue about living in a large city. Some supporters might see that the big city is full of facilities and has high opportunity for applying well-paid occupations, while some critics may claim that people working in the big city tend to experience expensive living cost. As far as I am concerned, I do believe that living in a large city is concerned a double-edged sword which presents both significant benefits and major drawbacks.
In terms of significant advantage, living in big city is not necessary to spend an amount of money for purchasing personal car; standardized public transportation has been set already in every districts and it is easy to access also. Skytrain, for example, known as BTS, has sufficient routes and bogies meeting metropolitan’s demand in rush hour. There is the bridges connecting BTS’s platform to accommodations, department stores, and fitnesses. Besides, a large number of supermarkets locating at workplaces or even around accommodations; it is convenience to buy ready-to-go foods reducing complexity in daily life.
On the other hand, people probably face tons of daily exhaust discharged from motor street vehicles, which makes air pollution affecting human lung. On top of that, large cities are normally accounted for high living expenses, there are serious pressures during the day and sometimes lead townsfolk’ suffer from chronic stress.
In conclusion, although the advent of living in a large city pose crucial values, its misvalues are often discernible, akin to a two sided coin. Therefore, I would like to suggest the releasing toxic gases from every types of vehicles be regulated strictly by the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...very districts and it is easy to access also. Skytrain, for example, known as BTS, h...
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Line 2, column 354, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'There are the bridges'?
Suggestion: There are the bridges
...etropolitan's demand in rush hour. There is the bridges connecting BTS's platform to accom...
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Line 2, column 468, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...artment stores, and fitnesses. Besides, a large number of supermarkets locating at workplaces or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35897435897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14887527156 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677655677656 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3673709521 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8181818182 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417260505108 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138346227638 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122726142912 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.240505257144 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100366760716 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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