Arctic deer live on islands in Canada's arctic regions. They search for food by moving over ice from island to island during the course of the year. Their habitat is limited to areas warm enough to sustain the plants on which they feed and cold enough, at least some of the year, for the ice to cover the sea separating the islands, allowing the deer to travel over it. Unfortunately, according to reports from local hunters, the deer populations are declining. Since these reports coincide with recent global warming trends that have caused the sea ice to melt, we can conclude that the purported decline in deer populations is the result of the deer's being unable to follow their age-old migration patterns across the frozen sea.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The author proposes that the reason for the decrease in the population of deer in the canada’s arctic region is due the global warming, that melted away the frozen sea route which the deers used to migrate to other islands where they can feed on the vegetation for their survival. The argument looks dubious for the author has overlooked few vital points that are necessary to make it logically convincing.
Firstly, is the global warming the sole reason behind the decrease in the population of the arctic deer? The writing mentions that there are local hunters present in the deer’s habitat. It could be the case that excessive hunting of deers by them has decreased the deer’s population and listing global warming would just cover up their activities. Deer hunting isn’t a new sport, people have been doing it for hundreds of years. They have been hunted for years for meat and their skin, which could fetch heavy prices in the market. If it is indeed true that deers are being recklessly hunted in the region, the changed trends in global warming could just be a mere coincidence, and will positively weaken the author’s argument.
Secondly, is there enough of food for the residing deer population? It is mentioned that deers migrate to the other islands in search of food for not every island is warm enough to support the vegetation they feed on. If the islands are not having enough of food, which for instance, could be a result of the increased human activity on the islands, can adversely affect the new generation of the arctic deer. If there is a dearth of vegetation on the islands, the deer population will undoubtedly decrease for the food isn't enough to sustain the population. The author should have consulted with the local authorities and other sources as the hunters, in no manner, are the sources of credible information.
To conclude, had the author presented more germane facts to substantiate his claims, his argument could’ve been much more persuasive.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 340 350
No. of Characters: 1611 1500
No. of Different Words: 158 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.294 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.738 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.401 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 48 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 30 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.728 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.357 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.36 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.564 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.105 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... will undoubtedly decrease for the food isnt enough to sustain the population. The a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.6327345309 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.9520958084 85% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 28.8173652695 73% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 2260.96107784 74% => OK
No of words: 337.0 441.139720559 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94362017804 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53624675736 2.78398813304 91% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 204.123752495 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492581602374 0.468620217663 105% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6305308226 57.8364921388 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 119.503703932 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 5.70786347227 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.67664670659 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309888442176 0.218282227539 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118195134025 0.0743258471296 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104524554878 0.0701772020484 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175403557141 0.128457276422 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120116533322 0.0628817314937 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 14.3799401198 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.3550499002 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.5979740519 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 98.500998004 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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