The council of Maple County, concerned about the county's becoming overdeveloped, is debating a proposed measure that would prevent the development of existing farmland in the county. But the council is also concerned that such a restriction, by limiting the supply of new housing, could lead to significant increases in the price of housing in the county. Proponents of the measure note that Chestnut County established a similar measure ten years ago, and its housing prices have increased only modestly since. However, opponents of the measure note that Pine County adopted restrictions on the development of new residential housing fifteen years ago, and its housing prices have since more than doubled. The council currently predicts that the proposed measure, if passed, will result in a significant increase in housing prices in Maple County.
The council of maple county is debating to pass proposed measures to prevent the overdevelopment of the county, with the concerns that passing this measure may result in escalation of prices of the houses in the county. The council has come to this conclusion based on the observation noted on Chestnut County and Pine County, of which the housing prices have increased after establishing the similar measure. However, before this conclusion can be accepted the following reasoning should be taken into account.
According to the council the prices have increased in both the other conties approximately 10- 15 years ago. It is pointless to assume that after a decade the pricing of any area would not increase and the reason for the escalation of the pricing can be establishing the law of restriction to make more houses. It is highly probable that economical changes that happened during the last fifteen years are different then the current scenarios.
The council have apparently compared the two conty but has failed to mention that are these three different areas comparable or not? It is possible that the Chestnut and Pine county are situated in the urban areas or the infrastructure and environment to live in has become likable for the residents, resulting in demands to live in that area and increasing the prices of the houses.
Furthermore, the council has clearly failed to explain the link between overdevelopment and restricting the development of farmlands. Yes, increasing in the number of houses clearly means that more people will come to live in that area but overdevelopment of population or the industrial area is not clearly not mentioned in the claim.
In conclusion, the stated argument is flawed and based on the unwarranted assumptions. If the council takes into account the above reasoning and presents a more reliable claim perhaps with the help of systematic research study.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 6 2
No. of Sentences: 12 15
No. of Words: 312 350
No. of Characters: 1571 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.203 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.035 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.855 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 118 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 89 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 59 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 42 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.755 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.354 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.354 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.046 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The council of maple county is debating to pass proposed measures to prevent the...
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Line 2, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... prices have increased in both the other conties approximately 10- 15 years ago. ...
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Line 2, column 339, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...more houses. It is highly probable that economical changes that happened during the last f...
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Line 2, column 416, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
...ng the last fifteen years are different then the current scenarios. The council hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.6327345309 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 11.1786427146 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 13.6137724551 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 28.8173652695 56% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 16.3942115768 73% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 2260.96107784 71% => OK
No of words: 312.0 441.139720559 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13141025641 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.56307096286 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89889450182 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 204.123752495 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 705.55239521 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 19.7664670659 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1283768605 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.416666667 119.503703932 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.70786347227 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216537733187 0.218282227539 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733011919107 0.0743258471296 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900441318087 0.0701772020484 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102341907139 0.128457276422 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722477122532 0.0628817314937 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 14.3799401198 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 48.3550499002 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.5979740519 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 98.500998004 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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