In order for any work of art—for example, a film, a novel, a poem, or a song—to have merit, it must be understandable to most people.
Art is a way to express one’s beliefs, thoughts and emotions. Various artists around the globe use disparate artistic methods to show their artistic sides either through words, music, drawing or acting.In a world filled with different types of people, it is obvious that every person would have his or her own different perception. Every other artist works in their own different ways, but the most important thing is the thought that is conveyed through their arts. Sometimes, it is hidden that it requires some amount of understanding and intelligence and sometimes it is found very clearly. In my opinion for any art to have its worth it is necessary to understand the meaning behind it.
Firstly, any artform becomes famous only if people are able to understand it. Even if the art form requires many explanations people often go to depth to understand its meanings. Various movies or these days series of episodes only become famous if they are praised by audiences and reach to grandiloquent award functions’ nominations. For instance the movie ‘3 idiots’ is about 3 indian guys studying in the same engineering college but having different passions to pursue. The way the movie has been presented with the storylines and dialogues even though the people not born in India understand the meaning of the movie that every person must follow their passion. The movie became very popular globally even though it has been released in Hindi language.Even after almost a decade the movie is still in vogue globally. The only reason for that is that audiences are able to get and appreciate the message behind it.
Secondly, for the people who are into literature, they read books or novels which are comprehensible and avert meaningful thoughts or messages. It is not necessary that these messages be only philosophical but it may be anything that is helpful. Any common man who is keen to read books would be finding different books to read and will come across books which got famous because so many people liked it and found it useful. There are so many writers around every corner of the world but not every writer’s work is praised by everyone. People become very desperate to know more about the works of artists only to enjoy the hidden messages in their poems and stories.
There might be some people arguing that arts should not be bound by the dogma that others should like it. Maybe they are right that expressing one’s emotions must not have any boundaries, and that the artist must work without expectations of getting the merit by people.Hence, I believe that the work of any artist gets praise and value if the people are able to understand and connect with it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 33.0505617978 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2242.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 457.0 442.535393258 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90590809628 5.05705443957 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56635809134 2.79657885939 92% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487964989059 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 695.7 704.065955056 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6066997489 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0526315789 23.4991977007 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.89473684211 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278675648835 0.243740707755 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822061825761 0.0831039109588 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589072415909 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169717869052 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.046496010682 0.0667264976115 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 14.1392134831 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.8420337079 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.