The author proposes that, limiting the supply of new housing is the measure for country’s becoming even more developed. The author also considered the previous year’s experiences about the impeding the supply of new housing will lead to rise in the price of housing. But, there is no proper conformation about the given fact and also it does not seems to be logical. When we look closer into the given argument, it seems to be insufficient to support the statement.
Firstly, the author mentions about the overdevelopment of the Maple country which does not seem to be practice because every person wish to be in developed country rather than living in undeveloped country. The author does not states that in what aspect the country is developing. Because when the country is developed with respect to technology which is a very good sign of development. Many people always think to live in a very developed place as we get all the necessary things in few minutes. So the author must have mentioned about the field in which the nation is developing.
Secondly, the author states that, in other country’s like Chestnut country and Pine country when they have followed the same measure mentioned by the author have faced an issue regarding the drastic increase in the housing rates. But, comparing one country’s condition with other country is not sufficient because different country’s have different conditions with respect to people, climate, economic status and the rule of the government. Despite, comparing other country’s, the author also compares it’s year’s which was 10 and 15 year’s ago. Comparing some previous year’s condition to present year’s condition does not provide a valid proof as there have been many changes happened in this year’s.
Thirdly, the author instead of averting the supply of new houses should have thought a better solution to this problem. The author must have made some useful advertisements which would advocate people of Maple country and know their country’s position. The author must have said the importance of land available in the country and by building new houses much space is occupied by obliterating the green environment where animals have their shelter. Although, overdevelopment is not considered as a huge problem as all the metropolitan cities present now are even developed by which people across the world likes to live in those countries.
Lastly, the author must have provided some proofs to support the argument and the author must have also explored some variables. The hypothesis stated by the author is not entirely convincing as well as more questions need to be answered by the author.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 8 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 19 15
No. of Words: 435 350
No. of Characters: 2177 1500
No. of Different Words: 203 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.567 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.005 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.585 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 168 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 78 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.895 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.561 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.632 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.384 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.589 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.171 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'seem'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: seem
...out the given fact and also it does not seems to be logical. When we look closer into...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 347, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'seem'
Suggestion: seem
...out the given fact and also it does not seems to be logical. When we look closer into...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: state
...ndeveloped country. The author does not states that in what aspect the country is deve...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'state'
Suggestion: state
...ndeveloped country. The author does not states that in what aspect the country is deve...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... what aspect the country is developing. Because when the country is developed with resp...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: IT_IS[22]
Message: Did you mean 'its' (possessive pronoun) instead of 'it's' (short form of 'it is')?
Suggestion: its
...her country’s, the author also compares it’s year’s which was 10 and 15 year’s ago. ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, as well as, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.6327345309 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 55.5748502994 95% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 16.3942115768 91% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2254.0 2260.96107784 100% => OK
No of words: 435.0 441.139720559 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1816091954 5.12650576532 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.56307096286 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73102480744 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 204.123752495 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47816091954 0.468620217663 102% => OK
syllable_count: 691.2 705.55239521 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5519550559 57.8364921388 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.631578947 119.503703932 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8947368421 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 5.70786347227 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0624494044899 0.218282227539 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0258810210121 0.0743258471296 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280038475586 0.0701772020484 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0426518409584 0.128457276422 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300454286535 0.0628817314937 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.3799401198 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 48.3550499002 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.5979740519 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.32208582834 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 98.500998004 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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