In this letter, the author concludes that the town BalmerIsland should limit the number of moped rentals. To support this conclusion, the author points out that moped is a popular form of transportation and involved in many pedestrian accidents. Furthermore, the author sets the neighboring island of Seaville that achieved accidents reduction by such limitation as a typical example to support the recommendation. However, these all constitute a problematic argument in favor of its conclusion and fail to provide convincing support making this argument sound and invulnerable.
A threshold proble...
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- The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette."On BalmerIsland, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the populationincreases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involvin 81
Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 584 350
No. of Characters: 3166 1500
No. of Different Words: 289 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.916 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.421 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.069 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 254 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 196 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 139 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 97 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.207 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.577 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.257 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.505 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.042 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in short, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 55.5748502994 146% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 16.3942115768 195% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3270.0 2260.96107784 145% => OK
No of words: 584.0 441.139720559 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59931506849 5.12650576532 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91590194646 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22859850136 2.78398813304 116% => OK
Unique words: 301.0 204.123752495 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515410958904 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 1016.1 705.55239521 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 19.7664670659 132% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8082833207 57.8364921388 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.769230769 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 5.70786347227 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 6.88822355289 232% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0580288387888 0.218282227539 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0174130165324 0.0743258471296 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268951234658 0.0701772020484 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0313604180413 0.128457276422 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259889217766 0.0628817314937 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.3550499002 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.5979740519 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32208582834 113% => OK
difficult_words: 172.0 98.500998004 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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