The following appeared in a letter from a firm providing investment advice for a client.
"Most homes in the northeastern United States, where winters are typically cold, have traditionally used oil as their major fuel for heating. Last heating season that region experienced 90 days with below-normal temperatures, and climate forecasters predict that this weather pattern will continue for several more years. Furthermore, many new homes are being built in the region in response to recent population growth. Because of these trends, we predict an increased demand for heating oil and recommend investment in Consolidated Industries, one of whose major business operations is the retail sale of home heating oil."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
In the passage the author mainly concern about the future demand of the heating oil in the winter season. most homes in the northeastern United States, have traditionaly used oil as their heating fuel to reduce the excessive cold of the nature. The main argument of this fact that the demand curve of the area does not depend on the weather if the people do not have enough money to buy. Another reason, just investment in the industries blindly may not take a good result for the businessmen as there are some factors to determine it.
Firstly, climate change is now becoming an important issue for the earth as the ecological balance of it much more deterred by the human policies. Carbon di oxide gas has the most influential effect in this process. The usual life at any cetain location is more depend upon the weather condition. For example, in Africa there was a beautiful time when they have a plenty of foods, crops and cattle fields to earn their livelihood. But the badly consequences of the world atmosphere the country faces disastar which morely impact the economical situation of men and women. The society belong that place do not get rid of the curse of many crimes. At this point, the thinking of increasing of the number of pupil does not mean to wax the demand.
Secondly, the investors of this area get a great chance to income a lot of money to sell oil. According to the reality, if they do not consider about the people's ability to buy anything just like a luxurious lifestyle. The business facility would be more flexible to predict the foresight position of the product or services. For example, Apple lauches their most attractive mobile phone I-phone in the market with various features and high qualatitive manners. Though most of the consumers in the low gross domestic income countries can not afford this phone. they might choose Nokia or any other local company's product.
So, it is more clear that just augmenting the population can not be the hope for the good wanting situation in the urban area. At the same time, to expect from the families to buy their industrial services ia a type of scam. Necessary is called the mother of invention. they might use electronic coil to make them warm.By considering this the authority should take in account all to designtheir market policy
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Comments
e-rater score report
flaws:
out of topics
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 404 350
No. of Characters: 1878 1500
No. of Different Words: 237 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.483 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.649 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.428 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 131 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 86 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.792 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.277 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.277 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.037 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 88, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...the future demand of the heating oil in the winter season. most homes in the northeastern United ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 107, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Most
...f the heating oil in the winter season. most homes in the northeastern United States...
^^^^
Line 2, column 533, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... faces disastar which morely impact the economical situation of men and women. The society...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 584, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'belongs'.
Suggestion: belongs
...situation of men and women. The society belong that place do not get rid of the curse ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...lity, if they do not consider about the peoples ability to buy anything just like a lux...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... features and high qualatitive manners. Though most of the consumers in the low gross ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 561, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...me countries can not afford this phone. they might choose Nokia or any other local c...
^^^^
Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...sary is called the mother of invention. they might use electronic coil to make them ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 319, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: By
...t use electronic coil to make them warm.By considering this the authority should t...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.6327345309 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 13.6137724551 37% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 55.5748502994 101% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1914.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 403.0 441.139720559 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74937965261 5.12650576532 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4819900018 2.78398813304 89% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 204.123752495 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598014888337 0.468620217663 128% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 705.55239521 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 19.7664670659 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.4294284103 57.8364921388 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1428571429 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 23.324526521 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.70786347227 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187822819714 0.218282227539 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473183038741 0.0743258471296 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767824971795 0.0701772020484 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115317552278 0.128457276422 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938291366098 0.0628817314937 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 14.3799401198 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.3550499002 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 98.500998004 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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