The following appeared in a letter from a homeowner to a friend.
"Of the two leading real estate firms in our town—Adams Realty and Fitch Realty—Adams Realty is clearly superior. Adams has 40 real estate agents; in contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Adams' revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch and included home sales that averaged $168,000, compared to Fitch's $144,000. Homes listed with Adams sell faster as well: ten years ago I listed my home with Fitch, and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with Adams, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use Adams Realty."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The author is suggesting for his friend to use Adam Reality - real estate firm - to sell his house becuase, as the author claims, they are superior. The author provides several points support his opinion, however these points rely on many unstated assumptions that need to be proved before accepting such opinion.
The author is quite confiedent that Adam Reality is superior over its competitor in the town, Fitch Reality. How superior it is? It is not clear if the author means superiority in terms of customer services, prices or marketing. At the end, assesing the firm will be based on his friend’s requirment, wither he is looking for cheap firm or a firm with good marketing capability. If his friend is not concern with time and would prefer to have the cheapest firm, the author’s seggestion will not be useful. The assumption that his friend’s is looking for the best firm is not supported by any evidence.
Listing the financial and structural facts of Adam Reality is irrelevant to his friend’s needs. Yes, a company with higher number of employees and high revenue may indicate that this company has a big business. However, for example, it is not necessary that a company with higher number of empoyees will provide better service for customers. This applies to the company’s revenue too. High revenue could indicate many things, such as that this company is more expensive or has a large base of customers. But it is not nessary that what the author’s friend’s is looking for.
Finally, the author experience cannot be generalised arbitrarly. His experience with Fitch Reality, when he had to wait for four months to sell his house, could be because his house itself. It might be located in bad location or was in bad condition. It is not always the the real estate fault when a property do not sell. The author assumes that Fitch Reality is bad in timing in general, and the continue to be like that. This assumption can only be proved if the author have a statistics showing the average time both firms sell properties.
The author’s suggestion for his friend is based on many unwarranted assumption and could be bad suggestion. Once the author clarifiy his supporting points, then we will be able to know if his suggestion is good.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The author is suggesting for his friend to use Adam Reality - real estate firm - to sell his house becuase, as the author claims, they are superior.
Error: becuase Suggestion: because
Sentence: The author provides several points support his opinion, however these points rely on many unstated assumptions that need to be proved before accepting such opinion.
Error: unstated Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: The author is quite confiedent that Adam Reality is superior over its competitor in the town, Fitch Reality.
Error: confiedent Suggestion: confident
Sentence: At the end, assesing the firm will be based on his friend's requirment, wither he is looking for cheap firm or a firm with good marketing capability.
Error: requirment Suggestion: requirement
Error: assesing Suggestion: assessing
Sentence: If his friend is not concern with time and would prefer to have the cheapest firm, the author's seggestion will not be useful.
Error: seggestion Suggestion: suggestion
Sentence: However, for example, it is not necessary that a company with higher number of empoyees will provide better service for customers.
Error: empoyees Suggestion: employees
Sentence: But it is not nessary that what the author's friend's is looking for.
Error: nessary Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Finally, the author experience cannot be generalised arbitrarly.
Error: arbitrarly Suggestion: arbitrary
Error: generalised Suggestion: generalized
Sentence: The author's suggestion for his friend is based on many unwarranted assumption and could be bad suggestion.
Error: unwarranted Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Once the author clarifiy his supporting points, then we will be able to know if his suggestion is good.
Error: clarifiy Suggestion: clarify
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 13 2
No. of Sentences: 22 15
No. of Words: 387 350
No. of Characters: 1816 1500
No. of Different Words: 183 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.435 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.693 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.474 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 134 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 36 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.591 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.906 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.324 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.518 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.127 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oved before accepting such opinion. The author is quite confiedent that Adam Re...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... was in bad condition. It is not always the the real estate fault when a property do no...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... was in bad condition. It is not always the the real estate fault when a property do no...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 395, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...eality is bad in timing in general, and the continue to be like that. This assumption can on...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, look, may, then, for example, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.6327345309 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 28.8173652695 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 55.5748502994 61% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 16.3942115768 79% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 387.0 441.139720559 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94832041344 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7955515162 2.78398813304 100% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 204.123752495 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.496124031008 0.468620217663 106% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 705.55239521 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.76447105788 103% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 19.7664670659 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5186498879 57.8364921388 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.0454545455 119.503703932 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5909090909 23.324526521 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.70786347227 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143823941829 0.218282227539 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538176971049 0.0743258471296 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511381584965 0.0701772020484 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893157630836 0.128457276422 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455334032914 0.0628817314937 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 14.3799401198 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.3550499002 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.197005988 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 98.500998004 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.