The following appeared in a memo from the director of a large group of hospitals. "In a laboratory study of liquid antibacterial hand soaps, a concentrated solution of UltraClean produced a 40 percent greater reduction in the bacteria population than did the liquid hand soaps currently used in our hospitals. During a subsequent test of UltraClean at our hospital in Workby, that hospital reported significantly fewer cases of patient infection than did any of the other hospitals in our group. Therefore, to prevent serious patient infections, we should supply UltraClean at all handwashing stations throughout our hospital system."
Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what the implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.
The argument could be summerized as the higher concenterated hand soap should be used in the hospitals inorder to reduced these hospistal patient indection. This recommendation is based on some assumptions.
For instance, the assumption that the nearby hospital, where this high concenterated hand soap is applied, represent the same kind and level of bacterial intense presence in all of the hospitials of that medical system. Perhaps, some hospital in the system experience a higher level of bacteria and some kinds of bateria that will not result the same infection reduction declination as the tested hosipital. Thus, the recommendation could be seriously challenged.
Moreover, the author assumed that this intended 40% reduction of infection by using this high concenterated hand saop is an unconditional result, which could be expected under any circumstances. Maybe in some hospitals, which deal with a different kind of patients other than the nearby tested hopsital, less or more records of infection would be experienced.
Furthermore, the author assumed that the main way of patient infection is through hands, which is contaninated by a harmful bacteria. There could be a set of other reasons of infection rather than hands. To demonstrate, maybe sneezing or coughing resulted in a polluted contaminated air in a hospitial which would lead to patients infection.
In addition, it is assumed in the argument that the all of the hospital on the system experience the same intense of number of patients and the same coming patients frequency, which consequently gurantee the same level of baterical concenteration of the people inside the different hospital and thus endorse a typical way in order to reduce patients infection effieciently in all of the hospitals.
For example, a hospital maybe accounted for emergency cases and another hospital allocated to surgical operations. This two hospitals are expected to suffer from a different level and different kind of the bacterial existance. Whereas, the emergency hospital is expected to suffer a high level of bacterial concentration and a vast range of bacterial kinds than these bacteria existing in the surgical operation hospitals, where the operation rooms and well prepared and the worker staff are well trained to maintain a high level of hygein enviroment under a severe bacterial conditions.
These previously illustrated assumptions are a sample of a set of assumptions that is adopted by the author in order to point out this announced recommendation in order to gurantee a high level of hygien and reduce patient infection in the hospital systems
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
Sentence: The argument could be summerized as the higher concenterated hand soap should be used in the hospitals inorder to reduced these hospistal patient indection.
Error: hospistal Suggestion: hospital
Error: summerized Suggestion: summarized
Error: concenterated Suggestion: concentrated
Error: indection Suggestion: infection
Error: inorder Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: For instance, the assumption that the nearby hospital, where this high concenterated hand soap is applied, represent the same kind and level of bacterial intense presence in all of the hospitials of that medical system.
Error: concenterated Suggestion: concentrated
Error: hospitials Suggestion: hospitals
Sentence: Perhaps, some hospital in the system experience a higher level of bacteria and some kinds of bateria that will not result the same infection reduction declination as the tested hosipital.
Error: hosipital Suggestion: hospital
Error: bateria Suggestion: material
Sentence: Moreover, the author assumed that this intended 40 reduction of infection by using this high concenterated hand saop is an unconditional result, which could be expected under any circumstances.
Error: concenterated Suggestion: concentrated
Error: saop Suggestion: stop
Sentence: Maybe in some hospitals, which deal with a different kind of patients other than the nearby tested hopsital, less or more records of infection would be experienced.
Error: hopsital Suggestion: hospital
Sentence: Furthermore, the author assumed that the main way of patient infection is through hands, which is contaninated by a harmful bacteria.
Error: contaninated Suggestion: contaminated
Sentence: To demonstrate, maybe sneezing or coughing resulted in a polluted contaminated air in a hospitial which would lead to patients infection.
Error: hospitial Suggestion: hospital
Sentence: In addition, it is assumed in the argument that the all of the hospital on the system experience the same intense of number of patients and the same coming patients frequency, which consequently gurantee the same level of baterical concenteration of the people inside the different hospital and thus endorse a typical way in order to reduce patients infection effieciently in all of the hospitals.
Error: effieciently Suggestion: efficiently
Error: concenteration Suggestion: concentration
Error: gurantee Suggestion: guarantee
Error: baterical Suggestion: material
Sentence: This two hospitals are expected to suffer from a different level and different kind of the bacterial existance.
Error: existance Suggestion: existence
Sentence: Whereas, the emergency hospital is expected to suffer a high level of bacterial concentration and a vast range of bacterial kinds than these bacteria existing in the surgical operation hospitals, where the operation rooms and well prepared and the worker staff are well trained to maintain a high level of hygein enviroment under a severe bacterial conditions.
Error: enviroment Suggestion: environment
Error: hygein Suggestion: hymen
Sentence: These previously illustrated assumptions are a sample of a set of assumptions that is adopted by the author in order to point out this announced recommendation in order to gurantee a high level of hygien and reduce patient infection in the hospital systems
Error: hygien Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: gurantee Suggestion: guarantee
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 20 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 413 350
No. of Characters: 2171 1500
No. of Different Words: 179 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.508 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.257 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.011 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 165 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 136 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 110 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 72 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27.533 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.231 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.6 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.344 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.679 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.075 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 7 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...endation is based on some assumptions. For instance, the assumption that the ne...
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Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... level of bacterial intense presence in all of the hospitials of that medical system. Perh...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ndation could be seriously challenged. Moreover, the author assumed that this i...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rds of infection would be experienced. Furthermore, the author assumed that the...
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Line 4, column 127, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'bacterium'?
Suggestion: bacterium
...nds, which is contaninated by a harmful bacteria. There could be a set of other reasons ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hich would lead to patients infection. In addition, it is assumed in the argume...
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Line 5, column 55, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., it is assumed in the argument that the all of the hospital on the system experi...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...it is assumed in the argument that the all of the hospital on the system experience the s...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
... number of patients and the same coming patients frequency, which consequently gurantee ...
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Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...duce patients infection effieciently in all of the hospitals. For example, a hospital ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... effieciently in all of the hospitals. For example, a hospital maybe accounted ...
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Line 6, column 579, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'condition'?
Suggestion: condition
...ein enviroment under a severe bacterial conditions. These previously illustrated assum...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t under a severe bacterial conditions. These previously illustrated assumptions...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, thus, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 55.5748502994 108% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 16.3942115768 177% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2217.0 2260.96107784 98% => OK
No of words: 413.0 441.139720559 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36803874092 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09803054672 2.78398813304 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 204.123752495 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.438256658596 0.468620217663 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 705.55239521 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 19.7664670659 76% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.8473053892 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.6372929249 57.8364921388 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.8 119.503703932 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5333333333 23.324526521 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 5.70786347227 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 5.15768463074 136% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.25449101796 247% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0621544949928 0.218282227539 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234357364301 0.0743258471296 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0206510294282 0.0701772020484 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0320280882231 0.128457276422 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221849566209 0.0628817314937 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 14.3799401198 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 48.3550499002 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 12.197005988 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 98.500998004 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.1389221557 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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