The study's report that fish consumption in substantial amount can prevent cold and reduce the abseinteisms in schools and workplaces is not succinct enough to consider the argument to be credible. There are certain flaws in the argument which can be evinced to strenghthen or weaken it. The study report does not describe the details such as the number of people of East Meria consuming fish. It is not described as the consumption of which kind of fish helps to prevent cold and it is even not necessary that all the fish have Ichthaid nutritional supplement in their oils. It is not even proper to conclude that only consumption of fish is reason for the prevention from cold. The treatment of cold depends upon its particular symptoms, those symtomps are also not described. It is quoted in the passage that it is the cold that results in abseinteism but it is not a strong point as abseinteism might also occur due to some other reasons and so these points weakens the cogency of the argument.
Firstly, The number of people living in East Meria consuming fish is not indicated. It is possible that only a little population consumes fish and in that case there is no point of proving the point of reduction in abseinteism in schools and workplaces and consumption of fish. On the other hand if a large population is consuming fish then people suffer very less from cold and abseinteism is very low. In the passage it is not described that the consumption of which kind of a particular fish leads to a reduction in cold. It is possible that only a few people have beniffited from the consumption of a particular kind of fish. Not all the fish have the nutritional supplement Ichthaid in their oils.
Secondly, There may be other reasons such as good diet, change in weather, less stress, that may have lead to a reduction in cold without the consumption of fish. Also the reasons due to which the people are suffering from cold is not evidenced because the cure of a particular cold depends upon the symptoms of the cold. Well it is no even necessary that it is cold that is the only reason for absenteism. There might also be other reasons such as some other kind of illness religious or social ceremonies etc. so it also does'nt make a valid point in proving abseinteis due to cold.
To sum up, The reason that cold increases abseinteism weakens the argument.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
the introduction is too long. minimum 3 arguments wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 420 350
No. of Characters: 1919 1500
No. of Different Words: 151 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.527 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.569 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.623 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 120 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.615 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.383 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.527 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.1 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt in their oils. It is not even proper to conclude that only consumption of fis...
^^^
Line 10, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hand if a large population is consuming fish then people suffer very less from c...
^^^
Line 11, column 139, Rule ID: KIND_OF_A[1]
Message: Don't include 'a' after a classification term. Use simply 'kind of'.
Suggestion: kind of
...described that the consumption of which kind of a particular fish leads to a reduction i...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 15, column 157, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ction in cold without the consumption of fish. Also the reasons due to which the ...
^^^
Line 16, column 7, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...cold without the consumption of fish. Also the reasons due to which the people are...
^^^^
Line 16, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...icular cold depends upon the symptoms of the cold. Well it is no even necessary t...
^^^
Line 18, column 48, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...us or social ceremonies etc. so it also doesnt make a valid point in proving abseintei...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, kind of, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.6327345309 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 2260.96107784 88% => OK
No of words: 419.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73031026253 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65661297853 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 204.123752495 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.360381861575 0.468620217663 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 705.55239521 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.96107784431 141% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.22255489022 95% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9678317005 57.8364921388 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.315789474 119.503703932 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 23.324526521 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.10526315789 5.70786347227 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 5.15768463074 330% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 6.88822355289 131% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0259868421087 0.218282227539 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0114429120829 0.0743258471296 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0214949261404 0.0701772020484 31% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0122675645549 0.128457276422 10% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236279192571 0.0628817314937 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 48.3550499002 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.197005988 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.5979740519 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.32208582834 84% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 98.500998004 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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