The following is a petition to the city council of Centerville:
"Over the past three years, there has been a marked increase in cases of 'sidewalk rage,' similar to the irrational anger drivers experience on the road, but instead among sidewalk walkers. The result is an increase in assaults, property damage, and disruptions of normal pedestrian traffic. In order to address this growing problem, the council must ban cell phone use on sidewalks. Not only do people texting or using their phones slow down pedestrian traffic, but they are also more likely to walk into the road or bump into other walkers. Children are especially vulnerable because they are too short to be easily seen. Middletown passed such a ban and not only have they heard no complaints, but the reported incidents of sidewalk crime has gone down significantly."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
Cellphones have in recent times gotten most individuals addicted to it that they keep on texting while at dates and while walking on the roads which might cause accidents but this does not conclude or justify that banning cellphone while walking will reduce accidents.
Banning cellphones in centreville might not reduce the reported incidents of sidewalk crime because it worked in middletown doesnt mean it will also work in centreville. Middletown might be a town with very educated people that listen and obey laws as opposed to centreville that might be a city majorly occupied by artisans and craftsmen, this will be very difficult to prove the ban will take effect and produce desired outcome as artisans and craftsmen in centreville might persist in using cellphones on sidewalks.
The population of middletown also might be very less compared to population at centreville and as such the ban took effect at middletown considering the less population, while a very high or increase in population at centreville might still have increased cases of sidewalk rage even when the cellphone ban has been placed.
Considering having same level of educated people who obey laws and increased population in both cities, a cellphone ban on the walkway may not reduce the incidents of sidewalk crime as middletown after the ban might not be hearing complaints of sidewalk crime doesnt mean they do not happen or have gone down significantly.
A ban of cellphone on sidewalk in centreville might not reduce the incidents of sidewalk crime as the criteria given for middletown lacks basis.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 259 350
No. of Characters: 1313 1500
No. of Different Words: 124 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.012 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.069 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.76 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 91 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 73 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 58 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 43.167 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.521 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.563 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.918 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.231 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...k crime because it worked in middletown doesnt mean it will also work in centreville. ...
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Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...le. Middletown might be a town with very educated people that listen and obey law...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e as middletown after the ban might not be hearing complaints of sidewalk crime doesnt mea...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...be hearing complaints of sidewalk crime doesnt mean they do not happen or have gone do...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.6327345309 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 28.8173652695 38% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 55.5748502994 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 2260.96107784 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 259.0 441.139720559 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15057915058 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.56307096286 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81075247086 2.78398813304 101% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 204.123752495 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471042471042 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 705.55239521 60% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 19.7664670659 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.8473053892 188% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.1805251028 57.8364921388 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 222.333333333 119.503703932 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.1666666667 23.324526521 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.20758483034 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.058212343102 0.218282227539 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0358274235648 0.0743258471296 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0222356143119 0.0701772020484 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.04008865755 0.128457276422 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0218479417842 0.0628817314937 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.4 14.3799401198 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 48.3550499002 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.1 12.197005988 165% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 12.5979740519 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.32208582834 110% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 98.500998004 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 12.3882235529 149% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 11.1389221557 172% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.