The following is a recommendation from the Board of Directors of Monarch Books.
"We recommend that Monarch Books open a café in its store. Monarch, having been in business at the same location for more than twenty years, has a large customer base because it is known for its wide selection of books on all subjects. Clearly, opening the café would attract more customers. Space could be made for the café by discontinuing the children's book section, which will probably become less popular given that the most recent national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten. Opening a café will allow Monarch to attract more customers and better compete with Regal Books, which recently opened its own café."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
Lastly, it assumes that monarch books will better compete with Regal Books, which recently opened its own café but does not reveal if they are in same business with Regal books.
Thus, the argument is not completely sound
The argument that opening a café in monarch book would attract more customers is not entirely logically convincing since it ignore to address some certain crucial assumptions.
Firstly, the argument assumes that since it has been in business for more than 20 years, has a large customer base because it is known for its wide selection of books on all subjects will make it attracts more customers if cafe is open in the store yet it fails to address the type of people patronising the store if they are the type that likes reading on internet.
Secondly, the argument states that Space could be made for the café by discontinuing the children's book section but does not address if the children section is conducive for cafe.
Thirdly, the argument assumes that national census indicated a significant decline in the percentage of the population under age ten but does not address the approach in which the census carried out their investigation.
Thus the argument is not completely sound, the argument would have been strengthened if the argument has addressed that the space of children book section is conducive, and if they are in competition with Regal book.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2 out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 3 2
No. of Sentences: 5 15
No. of Words: 196 350
No. of Characters: 954 1500
No. of Different Words: 109 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.742 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.867 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.637 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 63 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 58 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 39.2 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.224 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.557 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.775 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The argument that opening a café in monarch book would attract more ...
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Line 2, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns. Firstly, the argument assumes that since it has been in business for more t...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...us carried out their investigation. Thus the argument is not completely sound, t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.6327345309 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 11.1786427146 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 28.8173652695 52% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 55.5748502994 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 16.3942115768 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 978.0 2260.96107784 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 196.0 441.139720559 44% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98979591837 5.12650576532 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.56307096286 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6887900321 2.78398813304 97% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 204.123752495 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561224489796 0.468620217663 120% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 705.55239521 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.96107784431 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 22.8473053892 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.8266424798 57.8364921388 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 195.6 119.503703932 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.2 23.324526521 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.6 5.70786347227 256% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.20758483034 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241139758141 0.218282227539 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125934375973 0.0743258471296 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880134642572 0.0701772020484 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125934375973 0.128457276422 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880134642572 0.0628817314937 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.7 14.3799401198 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 48.3550499002 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.197005988 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.5979740519 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.32208582834 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 98.500998004 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 12.3882235529 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.1389221557 158% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.9071856287 151% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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