While most of the environmental problems we face result from the use of technology, society
must depend upon technology to find solutions to these problems."
Technology has proved to be a boon for mankind. It is technology which has helped us develop
in all fronts of life. Without technological developments we would still be living in pre-historic
age. It is the various technological innovations which have made this world progress so much
that nothing today seems to be impossible. Technology has made those things feasible which
once we never even thought of. We certainly have to pay a price for every comfort we get and
nothing comes free of cost. The various environmental problems which have resulted from
various technological innovations are the price we are paying to nature for our comfort. I agree
that if technology is causing all these environmental problems then technology alone should
bring out various measures to solve this problem.
Technology is progressing faster and faster. One nation wants to outshine the other nation by
creating something better and superior and in this rat race of competition our environment is
suffering a lot. There is a lot of chemical waste from the industries and it is polluting the air and
the water bodies. The pollution on roads because of numerous vehicles is increasing day by day.
There is large number of industries coming up which would add up to the pollution level. We
have become very advanced and technology has helped humans to progress in all fields of life
but now endeavor should be made to protect the environment. There should be such innovations
which create no hazards for our environment and if we are harming the environment we are
eventually harming ourselves. The effect of pollution on environment has resulted in global
warming and this would harm humans in the long run. The efforts in technology should now be
instigated to help the environment. Various technological measures should be taken to ensure
safety of the environment. Such fuels should be used which cause less pollution and alternate
options should be adopted in technology which are either not at all harmful or less harmful for
nature.
Although these environmental problems are caused due to technology but we should not forget
that these innovations in the technological front were made to aid humans in different fields of
life. Therefore, it is not only the responsibility of technology to solve the environment related
problems but of humans also who the cause behind all such problems is. We can help the
environment by putting restrictions on our technological use, that certainly does not mean
abstaining from it but putting a limit would certainly help. Another cause is the increasing
population which again can be solved by humans.
Therefore, neither technology nor society alone can solve this problem but the combined efforts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 19.5258426966 149% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 12.9106741573 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2340.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21158129176 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94049058636 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.458797327394 0.4932671777 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 721.8 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.5213668788 60.3974514979 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5 118.986275619 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7083333333 23.4991977007 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70833333333 5.21951772744 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 30.0 4.97078651685 604% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 26.0 7.80617977528 333% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296509583504 0.243740707755 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996464182881 0.0831039109588 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809310751227 0.0758088955206 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918925032128 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767776651647 0.0667264976115 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.38706741573 87% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 100.480337079 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.