The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company.
"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
The advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company has enlighten some of the flaws of their company based on the statistical report which has been collected from the marketing department of that company. They claimed that their movies are good enough to attract the viewers but they have a dearth amount of budget to advertise their good quality of movies and therefore they need to increase the amount of budget next year to reach the maximum public that they can avail through advertising. But, are their movies really good? Are the movies realizing according to the current taste of people? Are the majority of the people want to see this category of movies or not? Well, to demonstrate the flaws, we need to discuss and analyze the questions in a little bit descriptive manner.
Firstly, They have claimed that, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen- produced movies than in any other year. But why this happens? Maybe, the choices of people differs from the movie that are being released over the past years. That may be a reason that the movie production company failed to gather more people into their territory. They need to understand the current taste what the general people like to watch. They may release their movies based on the taste of their people.
Another reason may arise when the movie production company claimed that although fewer people attended to see the movie but the quality of their movies are good because people are opinionated some positive reviews based on the movie quality. Again, This may verisimilitude the main topic that the movies does not belong that much of attraction that can habituate the general peoples idea. People nowadays tend to watch the ultra graphical 3D movies to refresh their mind. What if their movies are from the old culture and obviously young generation will not interested to watch that particular movie because they may think that this movie will be a waste of time for them.
You can't deny the tastes of your young generation. It should be the primary goal to attract the young society of a city or area. They will gain you the most of the profits even beyond your imagination how enthusiastic they are to share their experience with other friends if that movie attracts those young fellas. All you need is to provide some good movies which can attract those people like a magnet.
Last but not the least, Yes, Advertising may occur a big role to become a successful movie. But, if we distract our thinking from movie world to the tech world, we can see that, Xiaomi a Chinese brand without any sort of advertisement are doing their much income from the Indian market just by providing some good quality smartphone. People are reaching automatically to them to buy the best available phone according to their budget. They simply invest all of their money to develop their product as good as the can be able. And what do they result? Xiaomi is the number one smartphone selling company of India with almost a zero percent advertising. All you need to develop your commodities and people will find you automatically.
Super Screen Movie Production Company should aware of the above mentioned flaws to make the best results of their efforts. Advertising is not the main hot topic to become successful in a business rather many important factors can play to become successful in a project.
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- The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company According to a recent report from our marketing department during the past year fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any ot 58
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'enlightened'.
Suggestion: enlightened
...per Screen Movie Production Company has enlighten some of the flaws of their company base...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... Movie Production Company has enlighten some of the flaws of their company based on the sta...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 771, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... discuss and analyze the questions in a little bit descriptive manner. Firstly, They h...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...traction that can habituate the general peoples idea. People nowadays tend to watch the...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...and obviously young generation will not interested to watch that particular movie because ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ll be a waste of time for them. You cant deny the tastes of your young generatio...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, well, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.9520958084 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 28.8173652695 222% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 55.5748502994 139% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2827.0 2260.96107784 125% => OK
No of words: 580.0 441.139720559 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87413793103 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41954671416 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 204.123752495 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460344827586 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 870.3 705.55239521 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 4.96107784431 242% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 19.7664670659 147% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7873085981 57.8364921388 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4827586207 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.48275862069 5.70786347227 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.20758483034 244% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32423278873 0.218282227539 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902311076005 0.0743258471296 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100347881481 0.0701772020484 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185535214575 0.128457276422 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901058877097 0.0628817314937 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.3799401198 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 98.500998004 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 75, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'enlightened'.
Suggestion: enlightened
...per Screen Movie Production Company has enlighten some of the flaws of their company base...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... Movie Production Company has enlighten some of the flaws of their company based on the sta...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 771, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... discuss and analyze the questions in a little bit descriptive manner. Firstly, They h...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 376, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
...traction that can habituate the general peoples idea. People nowadays tend to watch the...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 559, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...and obviously young generation will not interested to watch that particular movie because ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ll be a waste of time for them. You cant deny the tastes of your young generatio...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, well, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.9520958084 178% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 11.1786427146 98% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 28.8173652695 222% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 55.5748502994 139% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 16.3942115768 67% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2827.0 2260.96107784 125% => OK
No of words: 580.0 441.139720559 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87413793103 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41954671416 2.78398813304 87% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 204.123752495 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.460344827586 0.468620217663 98% => OK
syllable_count: 870.3 705.55239521 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 4.96107784431 242% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.76447105788 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 19.7664670659 147% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7873085981 57.8364921388 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4827586207 119.503703932 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 23.324526521 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.48275862069 5.70786347227 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.20758483034 244% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32423278873 0.218282227539 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902311076005 0.0743258471296 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100347881481 0.0701772020484 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185535214575 0.128457276422 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901058877097 0.0628817314937 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 14.3799401198 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.3550499002 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.5979740519 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 98.500998004 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.