An international development organization, in response to a vitamin A deficiency among people in the impoverished nation of Tagus, has engineered a new breed of millet high in vitamin A. While seeds for this new type of millet cost more, farmers will be paid subsidies for farming the new variety of millet. Since millet is already a staple food in Tagus, people will readily adopt the new variety. To combat vitamin A deficiency, the government of Tagus should do everything it can to promote this new type of millet.
This is such a great step taken up by the international development organization. Vitamin A is one of the most vital micronutrients required by our body. since Tagus is deficient in vitamin A the government should take every possible measure to fulfil the requirements of the people of Tagus.
As nothing comes easy, this step has to go through a lot of problems and difficulties to make it happen. This particular breed of millet is proved to be costly and enough incentives have to be given to farmers for cultivating it. This is not the only problem it is going to face. the government will have to invest a lot and where does the government get all the money form? the government gets all the money from the people fo that country and eventually, people will have to pay for it and most of the people in the Tagus will not be able to afford it.
a different breed of millet might also not be accepted by the people of Tagus and in order to make them attracted towards it, several advertisements and promotions have to be done which increases the cost as well. even after spending a huge amount of money in this project, one cannot make the people eat this particular type of millet forcefully. it has to have a great taste as well in order to fulfil the result. is there any other means of gaining vitamin A and at a cheaper rate would be another question to face.
these questions have to be answered with logic and reason as cultivating this breed of millet is not going to be easy for the farmers and after making the decision, the government has to face a huge amount of losses if the decision has to be taken back.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 300 350
No. of Characters: 1303 1500
No. of Different Words: 139 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.162 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.343 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.568 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 76 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 50 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 34 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 37.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 27.632 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.25 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.411 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.649 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.074 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...al micronutrients required by our body. since Tagus is deficient in vitamin A the gov...
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Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...al micronutrients required by our body. since Tagus is deficient in vitamin A the gov...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'A' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: A; The
...dy. since Tagus is deficient in vitamin A the government should take every possible m...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 574, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...t the only problem it is going to face. the government will have to invest a lot an...
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Line 1, column 669, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... the government get all the money form? the government gets all the money from the ...
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Line 1, column 1063, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
... done which increases the cost as well. even after spending a huge amount of money i...
^^^^
Line 1, column 1197, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...s particular type of millet forcefully. it has to have a great taste as well in or...
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Line 1, column 1265, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Is
... as well in order to fulfil the result. is there any other means of gaining vitami...
^^
Line 1, column 1368, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...rate would be another question to face. these questions have to be answered with logi...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 28.8173652695 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 55.5748502994 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 2260.96107784 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 300.0 441.139720559 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40333333333 5.12650576532 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.56307096286 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60396919251 2.78398813304 94% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 204.123752495 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473333333333 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 705.55239521 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.96107784431 121% => OK
Article: 4.0 8.76447105788 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.6319684462 57.8364921388 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.615384615 119.503703932 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 23.324526521 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92307692308 5.70786347227 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297295576994 0.218282227539 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101479976178 0.0743258471296 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652100306643 0.0701772020484 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297295576994 0.128457276422 231% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 14.3799401198 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.3550499002 135% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.54 12.5979740519 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.32208582834 87% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 98.500998004 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 12.3882235529 73% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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