The author of the given prompt opines in his letter to the editor of national aeronautics magazine that there has to be more scope given to the unmanned space expeditions than that of the manned ones. But the author's assertion which is made in a definitive tone is flawed to certain levels as it stands over certain unfound assumptions. He might hold water if those assumptions are not properly substantiated else they dramatically weaken the persuasiveness of the argument.
Firstly, the author takes the support of success if some robots placed into the space and the works done by them in a successful manner. But, to assert something, he must also take the failures of the robots too. The probes and robots which are made by human cannot act during the conditions in which they are not tuned to act in. Given that huge amount of money put over them to get trained may get lost if there no men to retrain it physically during some out of the box conditions. Hence, it may not be effective to send only robots to the space without a man accompanied.
Moreover, the author mentions that the information that can be retrieved by the robots during their space travel is more or equal to that of the information gathered by manial travel. But, the author fails to mention the organizations to which he is referring to. He fails to acknowledge space organizations which are known for their manial space expeditions. The national aeronautics organization might take helping hands from such organizations to carry out the effective manial space tasks. The author might come to second conclusion if he considers this factor
Even though it might seem viable that the cost of lives are greater than that of the information that are gathered according to the author - as he mentions the risk factor, there might be a case that the robot due to false training may send ineffective reports. Or the space scientists without analyzing with their bare eyes but only through the photos, may need more time to study on few areas. Thus, if human is carried on to the space to do the studies with some physical analysis needed, then man is undoubtedly the better choice to be put into the space than robots. The author, if considers these points might rethink about his opinion.
In a nutshell, the editor who asserts to decrease the manial space expeditions which he categorically mentions as risky and in effective needs to rethink about his argument. The editor makes flaws in understanding the human efforts needed and as well as fails to consider the success rates of the manial expeditions to juxtapose the manial and non manial space expedition. Therefore, if he considers the substantiations given, then he might come to the second conclusion or if clearly substantiate his unfounded assumptions, may ossify the point he makes in his opinion.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 485 350
No. of Characters: 2310 1500
No. of Different Words: 216 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.693 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.763 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.68 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 152 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 97 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 51 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.25 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.192 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.75 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.334 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.541 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.19 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 210, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
...s than that of the manned ones. But the authors assertion which is made in a definitive...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a successful manner" with adverb for "successful"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...to the space and the works done by them in a successful manner. But, to assert something, he must also...
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Line 5, column 565, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d conclusion if he considers this factor Even though it might seem viable that th...
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Line 9, column 405, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'substantiations'' or 'substantiation's'?
Suggestion: substantiations'; substantiation's
...edition. Therefore, if he considers the substantiations given, then he might come to the second...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 11.1786427146 89% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 13.6137724551 125% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 28.8173652695 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 55.5748502994 128% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2360.0 2260.96107784 104% => OK
No of words: 485.0 441.139720559 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86597938144 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69283662038 4.56307096286 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74078399353 2.78398813304 98% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 204.123752495 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461855670103 0.468620217663 99% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 705.55239521 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.8473053892 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.5868347328 57.8364921388 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.210526316 119.503703932 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5263157895 23.324526521 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 5.70786347227 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.25449101796 76% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191570228148 0.218282227539 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627340327853 0.0743258471296 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616583138015 0.0701772020484 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109557379289 0.128457276422 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519348801104 0.0628817314937 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.3799401198 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.3550499002 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.197005988 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 98.500998004 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.1389221557 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.