Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
every municipal or government job is focus on the population health, if any kind of flu or
disease is spreading in a particular area then their job is found out to root cause rather than
jumping on the solutions.routine checkup is good idea but is it genuine to have it on all
people,is it considerable?
if study has been taken properly that routine followup doesnt help to the population of that
area ,it might be helpful, but has it been taken care that people who are living in such areas
,are they still living over there or they moved somewhere else to save their lives since
administration is not taking care of them.if they are not coming to people and asking the issue
and not providing any kind of help then people might not trust the goverment or administration.
and, they will start looking for alternative ways to save their lives.
what if that area population has more younger generation today but in future their might be
chance that there are more kinds and older people living , and if cow flu impact their health
and no routine administartion provided , then could be a chance many people might loose their
lives.hence , it is very much needed to the government to keep an eye on such areas and near by
vicinity to make sure that flu is not spreading.since flu can spready widely in a no time to
the public , and goverment doesn'y pay any attention , there might chance that they might not
able to cure the disease as save the lives.
since goverment is not paying attention about the inoculation , it could be chance that people
start treating by themeselve with less knowledge which may be more harmful not for the current
generation but could for future, what if wrong taken by the pregnant ladies and it had impacted
not only mother but the child too and there might be chance that child may have bad sympotes
for life long for which country does not have any cure or medicine so no rou administration
might impact the future poplulation also.
We have seen such flus like plague, corona how impacted the people lives since goverment was
not aware about these flues and we know the history how long it took to resolve the plage issue
to get rid from the world.same goes with corona, where still people are surviving.There are
many countires which are not so great in healthcare and if such flus spread widely it might
impact country's economy also.
Althought its not only goverment but people job to make sure to have routinly checkup ,Hence it
is require to motivate the people and for the goverment to have routine checkup so that they
woould not face such high risk for lives as well for country economy.
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e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 21 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 23 2
No. of Sentences: 6 15
No. of Words: 470 350
No. of Characters: 2129 1500
No. of Different Words: 205 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.656 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.53 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.424 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 119 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 51 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 78.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.272 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.525 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.197 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Every
every municipal or government job is focus on...
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Line 4, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , is
... is it genuine to have it on all people,is it considerable? if study has been tak...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
... it on all people,is it considerable? if study has been taken properly that rout...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...en taken properly that routine followup doesnt help to the population of that area ,i...
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Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...snt help to the population of that area ,it might be helpful, but has it been tak...
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Line 6, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...hat people who are living in such areas ,are they still living over there or they...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...trust the goverment or administration. and, they will start looking for alternativ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What
... alternative ways to save their lives. what if that area population has more younge...
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Line 11, column 34, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: younger
...ives. what if that area population has more younger generation today but in future their mi...
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Line 12, column 57, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e are more kinds and older people living , and if cow flu impact their health and...
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Line 13, column 39, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... and no routine administartion provided , then could be a chance many people migh...
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Line 13, column 83, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...hen could be a chance many people might loose their lives.hence , it is very much ne...
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Line 14, column 12, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ny people might loose their lives.hence , it is very much needed to the governmen...
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Line 14, column 89, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...rnment to keep an eye on such areas and near by vicinity to make sure that flu is not ...
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Line 16, column 11, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ready widely in a no time to the public , and goverment doesny pay any attention ...
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Line 16, column 52, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
..., and goverment doesny pay any attention , there might chance that they might not ...
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Line 18, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Since
...to cure the disease as save the lives. since goverment is not paying attention about...
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Line 18, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...t paying attention about the inoculation , it could be chance that people start t...
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Line 23, column 37, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...on might impact the future poplulation also. We have seen such flus like plague, c...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: There
...orona, where still people are surviving.There are many countires which are not so gr...
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Line 28, column 25, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...idely it might impact countrys economy also. Althought its not only goverment but ...
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Line 29, column 86, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ob to make sure to have routinly checkup ,Hence it is require to motivate the peo...
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Line 30, column 4, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
... to have routinly checkup ,Hence it is require to motivate the people and for the gove...
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Line 30, column 12, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'motivating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: motivating
... routinly checkup ,Hence it is require to motivate the people and for the goverment to hav...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, still, then, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 19.6327345309 138% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 12.9520958084 124% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 11.1786427146 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 15.0 13.6137724551 110% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 28.8173652695 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 55.5748502994 83% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 16.3942115768 128% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2212.0 2260.96107784 98% => OK
No of words: 467.0 441.139720559 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73661670236 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50963574441 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 204.123752495 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.456102783726 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 705.55239521 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.96107784431 101% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 19.7664670659 35% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 66.0 22.8473053892 289% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.843342898 57.8364921388 290% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 316.0 119.503703932 264% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 66.7142857143 23.324526521 286% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.70786347227 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 31.0 5.15768463074 601% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 24.0 5.25449101796 457% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.20758483034 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238264933658 0.218282227539 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109738034189 0.0743258471296 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497484233544 0.0701772020484 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0601918027074 0.128457276422 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446859297749 0.0628817314937 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.3 14.3799401198 239% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.95 48.3550499002 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 12.197005988 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.4 12.5979740519 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.32208582834 111% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 98.500998004 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 12.3882235529 230% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.4 11.1389221557 255% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.9071856287 244% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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