Business manager of television station concludes that to attract more viewers and to avoid losing further advertising revenues, they should restore the time provided to weather and local news to its previous level.
It is stated that late-night programs devoted increased time to national news and less time to local and weather news. Complaints received from the viewers of the late night news program. It might be possible that news presenter who was giving the news of weather and local news was not that much capable to provide that news in particular given time of span. As it is not staed that complaints from the viewers received as time for the local and weather news was decreasing. It is also possible that signals of the news station was not worked properly when tthe local and weather news were presenting on televisions late night. If this two assumptions are considered then it weakens the managers's claim regarding time devoted to national news and weather and local news.
It might be alos possible that viewers want to see the news reagrding weather and local news in day time, as if this type of news are providing late night then it will not help viewers to keep aware about surroundings. At late night, people prefer to take rest instead of watching television programs. It we take this point in consideration then it weakens manager's conclusion.
Local businesses used to advertise during late night programs have just canceled their advertising contact with them. It is possible that as news program is running late night, they can't attract more viewers. As comparision with the day time news program, there might bne possibility that late night program has just 10% of the toatl news viewers. As viewers are decreasing, local business has just cancelled their advertising contacts. If we take this into consideration then it weakens the managers's conclusion and it will not help television station, by restoring time devoted to weather and local news.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ews program is running late night, they cant attract more viewers. As comparision wi...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'in particular']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.269886363636 0.25644967241 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.184659090909 0.15541462614 119% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110795454545 0.0836205057962 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0539772727273 0.0520304965353 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0568181818182 0.0272364105082 209% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107954545455 0.125424944231 86% => OK
Participles: 0.0568181818182 0.0416121511921 137% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.58237411204 2.79052419416 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0369318181818 0.026700313972 138% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.001811407834 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0482954545455 0.113004496875 43% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0170454545455 0.0255425247493 67% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00852272727273 0.0127820249294 67% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1980.0 2731.13054187 72% => OK
No of words: 329.0 446.07635468 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01823708207 6.12365571057 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.57801047555 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.328267477204 0.378187486979 87% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29179331307 0.287650121315 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185410334347 0.208842608468 89% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.115501519757 0.135150697306 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58237411204 2.79052419416 93% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 207.018472906 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.440729483283 0.469332199767 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.8366272004 52.1807786196 84% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.039408867 75% => OK
Sentence length: 21.9333333333 23.2022227129 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0186435649 57.7814097925 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 141.986410481 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 23.2022227129 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.724660767414 55% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.14285714286 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.58251231527 28% => OK
Readability: 51.1126646403 51.9672348444 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.47115384615 1.8405768891 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.528576384151 0.441005458295 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.16353275774 0.135418324435 121% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.105943736958 0.0829849096947 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.58566743773 0.58762219726 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.173546949892 0.147661913831 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.253249919719 0.193483328276 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135031094991 0.0970749176394 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.453562984436 0.42659136922 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0614498938215 0.0774707102158 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.377331687099 0.312017818177 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0980813708357 0.0698173142475 140% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.33743842365 60% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.87684729064 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.82512315271 83% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 6.46551724138 77% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 5.36822660099 93% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.82389162562 142% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 14.657635468 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6 -- The score is based on the average performance of 20,000 argument essays. This e-grader is not smart enough to check on arguments.
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