A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum in their school days. If national curriculum for study is kept same for the whole nation, then each student can have a same level of knowledge.
Whenever we want to comapre any two things then attributes shuold be same on the basis of which we are doing comparision. By applying a same curriculum in a nation, it helps us while comparing students' excellence in study on the smae level. If curriculum is kept same, then students of the rural portion can also be received the same study sources and materials as comparision with urbane students. It can lessen the fear of the rural students and they can apply in any colleges of the nation as they have the same knowledge as in comparision with any other student of nation.
With applying same national curriculum in schools, school innstitutions should also have a right to run some other courses which are beneficial for students and in which students are interested. Like, some students like to play guitar, football, basketball and cricket. Some students are also eager to gain knowledge about different science experiments.
Only study curriculum can't bring students' talent outside. If courses regarding diffrent games, science knoweldge and dancing are kept running, they can bring student's hidden talent outside in front of the nation. It is necessary for any student's personal growth and nation's growth.
These courses should be allowed to keep running in insdtitutions as per students' interest. It can help students to alos perform good in their area of interest.
Nation should apply same curriculum to all of its students to study to maintain the same level of study into whole nation. Besides, there should be a freedom to run other courses as per students' area of interest in institutions. By allowing this also, studnets can perform well in their area of interests.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whenever” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...can have a same level of knowledge. Whenever we want to comapre any two things then ...
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Line 7, column 23, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... experiments. Only study curriculum cant bring students talent outside. If cours...
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Line 11, column 149, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
... whole nation. Besides, there should be a freedom to run other courses as per students ar...
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Line 11, column 187, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...e a freedom to run other courses as per students area of interest in institutions. By al...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'if', 'regarding', 'so', 'then', 'well', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.273775216138 0.240241500013 114% => OK
Verbs: 0.132564841499 0.157235817809 84% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0979827089337 0.0880659088768 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0317002881844 0.0497285424764 64% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0432276657061 0.0444667217837 97% => OK
Prepositions: 0.152737752161 0.12292977631 124% => OK
Participles: 0.028818443804 0.0406280797675 71% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.65033627813 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0317002881844 0.030933414821 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0864553314121 0.0997080785238 87% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0345821325648 0.0249443105267 139% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0115273775216 0.0148568991511 78% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1923.0 2732.02544248 70% => OK
No of words: 319.0 452.878318584 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.02821316614 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.58838876751 92% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.35736677116 0.366273622748 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.294670846395 0.280924506359 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.210031347962 0.200843997647 105% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.103448275862 0.132149295362 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65033627813 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 219.290929204 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448275862069 0.48968727796 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 44.2452940322 55.4138127331 80% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 18.7647058824 23.380412469 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1405947728 59.4972553346 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.117647059 141.124799967 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 23.380412469 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.674092028746 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.94800884956 121% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 48.2317905219 51.4728631049 94% => OK
Elegance: 2.19444444444 1.64882698954 133% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.469667831796 0.391690518653 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.140637586932 0.123202303941 114% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.092563611847 0.077325440228 120% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.620729428511 0.547984918172 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.124548594523 0.149214159877 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192070889265 0.161403998019 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.159368262312 0.0892212321368 179% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.300951985612 0.385218514788 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.128015507917 0.0692045440612 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.291435109632 0.275328986314 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142719150079 0.0653680567796 218% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.4325221239 105% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.5995575221 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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