Nation's future totally depends on its young people. Youth of the nation can only prosper his nation worldwide. Prosperity of nation can identify only thorugh an analysis of succes of young people.
Society can prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields through instilling a sense of competition and cooperation both. As sense of cooperation is not only enough to make good leaders in any field. Young people mind is mallable, so society can shape them to make nation's youth powerful.
Good leader have intelligence, co-operation and eagerness to bring some new things in society. Co-opeartion is needed when you need to survive at some place with the limited soures available and when you need to work with people having different nature. Co-opeartion must be necessary when anyone want to lead in any field.
Leadership in any field leads to a competition. When one person compares his intellectual level and capacity with others then and then only he can know how much he is capable to run an industry, a government or any other field. When he starts to compete with others, then and then he polishes some skills in himslef by gaining some knowledge from others to make himself better than others. When he tries to gain something different as comaprision with others, he will be noticed in society. He can achieve a success and can lead the field in which he interested.
Co-operation brings out the strength of man which shows at which extent the person can be adjusted and compromised. Sense of co-operation provides him to survive in any situation, while sense of competition brings out good qualities and inbuilds some new quality in person.
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
- "Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned wit 50
- "According to a recent report by our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies ac 50
- The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...se of competition and cooperation both. As sense of cooperation is not only enough...
^^
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'anyone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...opeartion must be necessary when anyone want to lead in any field. Leadership in...
^^^^
Line 7, column 391, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ers to make himself better than others. When he tries to gain something different as...
^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'while']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.245901639344 0.240241500013 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.167213114754 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.072131147541 0.0880659088768 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0393442622951 0.0497285424764 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.055737704918 0.0444667217837 125% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.12131147541 0.12292977631 99% => OK
Participles: 0.0229508196721 0.0406280797675 56% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73833497709 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0393442622951 0.030933414821 127% => OK
Particles: 0.00655737704918 0.0016655270985 394% => OK
Determiners: 0.072131147541 0.0997080785238 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0327868852459 0.0249443105267 131% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0327868852459 0.0148568991511 221% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1697.0 2732.02544248 62% => OK
No of words: 282.0 452.878318584 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01773049645 6.0361032391 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.58838876751 89% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.372340425532 0.366273622748 102% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.269503546099 0.280924506359 96% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.163120567376 0.200843997647 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.120567375887 0.132149295362 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73833497709 2.79330140395 98% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 219.290929204 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528368794326 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 52.6656953443 55.4138127331 95% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6194690265 78% => OK
Sentence length: 17.625 23.380412469 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9290384676 59.4972553346 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0625 141.124799967 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 23.380412469 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3125 0.674092028746 46% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 44.5753546099 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.4875 1.64882698954 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37945802042 0.391690518653 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.190138140961 0.123202303941 154% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0959637646518 0.077325440228 124% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.58697304971 0.547984918172 107% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.134122631317 0.149214159877 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146839628697 0.161403998019 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133752931738 0.0892212321368 150% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.212752587847 0.385218514788 55% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0506278465459 0.0692045440612 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230717679109 0.275328986314 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.171083466408 0.0653680567796 262% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.30420353982 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 7.22455752212 125% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.66592920354 27% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.70907079646 148% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.5995575221 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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