Paleo diets, in which one eats how early hominids (human ancestors) did, are becoming increasingly popular. Proponents claim our bodies evolved to eat these types of food, especially bone broth, a soup made by cooking animal bones for several hours. They believe it has many health-promoting nutrients, such as cartilage, which can heal our joints, and chondroitin, which promotes nerve regeneration. Skeptics point out that ingested cartilage can’t replenish cartilage in your knees or elbows and ingested chondroitin doesn’t make our brains any healthier. Yet, there is strong anecdotal evidence that people who consume bone broth have fewer metabolic and inflammatory diseases than those who don’t. Therefore, ancient humans knew something about our physiology that we don’t, and that by emulating the way they ate, we can cure many chronic illnesses.
While this argument does provide information suggesting that paleo diets do have a positive effect on human health, it fails to account for some of the potential coincidence in these findings.
The argument provides multiple claims of benefits to adopting the paleo diet, such as bone broth promoting nerve regeneration. In the second sentence, it introduces the view points of skeptics to the diet, who use the fact that eating cartilage doesn't regrow lost cartilage as a counterpoint against those claiming the diet. However, because these two groups of people are only mentioned using the titles of "proponents" and "skeptics", there's no way to know the knowledge base that members of these groups actually have, or whether each group of statements is only based on personal opinions.
It's also stated that there is anecdotal evidence that those who eat bone broth have lower cases of metabolic or inflammatory disease than people who don't eat it. While this may be true, the argument again fails to provide background on those giving this evidence, and assumes that it comes from reputable sources. Even if this result has been seen to be true, there may be other reasons beyond an impact on the consumption of bone broth. Those who eat the broth may also pay more attention to their health in other ways that prevent or lower the chance of having these diseases, meaning the consumption of bone broth may not be the actual cause for these findings.
The assumption of this past statement as fact also informs the last sentence of the argument, which suggests that there is ancient wisdom in the paleo diet, and that following these dietary habits can possibly cure many current chronic illnesses. Firstly, it assumes a clear intentional knowledge that early hominids would have had in their diets, rather than merely a limited amount of access to certain foods. It also assumes that our current physiology is similar enough to our ancestors that the same type of diet won't have different effects on our potentially evolved physiology, a thought that hasn't been supported by any firm claims throughout the rest of the argument. Lastly, it also connects a possible cure for chronic illness to these ancestral ways of eating, for which clear evidence hasn't been provided. Even if the paleo diet does have a positive effect in decreasing metabolic and inflammatory ilness for some people as stated earlier, this doesn't prove that "many" chronic ilnesses can be cured by this or other ancient ways of eating, and also fails to consider that these diets could even have harmful effects on those with or without diseases.
The argument overall is based around certain assumptions of the beneficial relationship between adopting a paleo diet and curing illness or diasease, without providing enough evidence to support them.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 473 350
No. of Characters: 2315 1500
No. of Different Words: 228 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.664 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.894 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.473 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 164 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 125 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 81 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 33.786 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.752 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.929 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.352 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.615 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.089 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: can
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 13.6137724551 154% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 28.8173652695 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 55.5748502994 99% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 16.3942115768 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2405.0 2260.96107784 106% => OK
No of words: 467.0 441.139720559 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14989293362 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.56307096286 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7654448321 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 204.123752495 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509635974304 0.468620217663 109% => OK
syllable_count: 738.9 705.55239521 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.8473053892 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.7806345465 57.8364921388 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 171.785714286 119.503703932 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.3571428571 23.324526521 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.70786347227 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 6.88822355289 116% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.67664670659 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174903504429 0.218282227539 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674096408122 0.0743258471296 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408634285306 0.0701772020484 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877688361323 0.128457276422 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405060876036 0.0628817314937 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 14.3799401198 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 48.3550499002 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 12.197005988 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.5979740519 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.32208582834 110% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 98.500998004 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.1389221557 136% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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