Que. The following is part of a memorandum from the president of Humana University.
"Last year the number of students who enrolled in online degree programs offered by nearby Omni University increased by 50 percent. During the same year, Omni showed a significant decrease from prior years in expenditures for dormitory and classroom space, most likely because instruction in the online programs takes place via the Internet. In contrast, over the past three years, enrollment at Humana University has failed to grow, and the cost of maintaining buildings has increased along with our budget deficit. To address these problems, Humana University will begin immediately to create and actively promote online degree programs like those at Omni. We predict that instituting these online degree programs will help Humana both increase its total enrollment and solve its budget problems."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
The increase in number of students in Omni university by 50% because of the online degree program is the data that has to be validated.
The validation of such data leading to increase can have multiple reasons for the increase. We have to understand the dynamics. Whether such an increase in the number of student due to only online program offered? Or along with the Online programs, there is other different course the students are taking that has lead to increase in the student number.
Also, it could be a question to authenticate the increase in number of student by putting forth the question about the fee structure. What was the fees that the student has to pay for enrollment? The fees should be affordable to the middle class people and hence they are admitting their children at Omni university. The next valid question would be are they providing any waiver to the student who have scored greater their distinction grade and are such any criteria for the students based on grades?
Also, at Humana University where the enrollment is declining instead of an upsurge and the reasons for such decline could be apart from the reasons mentioned. The president at Humana University should make take correct steps and ask questions if the university is providing the online course, on what basis should they align the fee structure? Whether such fee structure will attract the students and the most important question would be how are they going to compensate for the deficits and would just adding the online course will help them take away from the deficits.
What are the different promoting strategies they are going to implement? If the implement strategies by themselves would be of high cost such as advertisements, posters etc. how ill they incur for the money.
All such questions has to be answered and hence it would be important to take the decision accordingly.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 15
No. of Words: 319 350
No. of Characters: 1537 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.226 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.818 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.528 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 83 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 60 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 37 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.267 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.45 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.338 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.644 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.118 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 369, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Rn
...e not inclusive in mainstream syllabus. rn The different Elective courses that are...
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Line 1, column 1580, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: RnDepending
...ence to his Educational qualifications. rnDepending on the subjects chosen, he himself will...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, so, therefore, apart from, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 313.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1214057508 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88179622138 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.533546325879 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 23.0359550562 135% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.961987959 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.3 118.986275619 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.3 23.4991977007 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.21951772744 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.97078651685 20% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132960071191 0.243740707755 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608130840567 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401818696979 0.0758088955206 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132960071191 0.150359130593 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667264976115 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 14.1392134831 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 48.8420337079 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 12.1743820225 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 11.2143820225 128% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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