“A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.”
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
I agree to the recommendation mentioned. I would like to start with mentioning a line,' The knowledge that is imbibed in the child in his cocooned stages will help him shape his butterfly stages'. The education system in any nation places a cucial role to shape the minds of the younger generations. This is possible if we provide them with uniform platforms and not making any distinctions in regards to their economic status.
In various nations, their have been different curriculculms that have been based on different boards. For example, In India, there are students who are going in different boards for their educations and the syllabus across varies acoording to their boards. If a child is seeking education from the Central school or from the international schools which is cutrrently the senattional across is likely to achieve better understanding of various subjects and will have more inquistive mindet and better exposure to analytical thinking as comparted to the child who is going to state level education system.
Also, the another difference is through infrastructure where the new projector systems would help understand the concept of the subjects in better ways and expand his thinking to another levels as compared to ther student where he or she is not even having the facilities to such learning systems.
This creates a major difference in their learning approaches and also their tendencies in asking questions.
The students who are in central boards have different opportunities apart fgrom academics in nurturing their skills in differnt sections such as extra and co-cirricular activities. Also, they have major advantage in acquiring better practical knowledge through better lba facilities. However, for the student who is going in a local school may not even have exposure to such practical approaches.
Apart from infrastructure, the teaching places a crucila role where good taechers with hefty salaries are appointed where the focus is more student oriented as compared to that of State boards where in one class there are around 60-70 students and the teaching quality is below average.
It would also be crucil for the EDUCATION MINISTRY TO CONSIDER THE ECONOMIC CONDITION OF THE familes and cond keep optimal fees across the strata which could be afforded by all.
Therefore, it owuld be highly benefecial for every child to gain his right to education by equal schooling across and not making any distinctins in the syllabus which could make partianship in growth of the child via education systems.
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...timings to telecast both of the news. Further, he should carry out a survey to...
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...er the local news or the national news. this survey would help him come to some conc...
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... more on local news or national news. If the manager returns to his intial tel...
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... save the lives of hundreds of people. Mass Medias such as television is consid...
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...icultural country like India to receive a forecasts about weather for farmers across as to ...
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...uld save their lives from terrorists. Such platforms have a crucial role to pl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, as to, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 12.9520958084 139% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 11.1786427146 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 13.6137724551 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 28.8173652695 101% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 55.5748502994 97% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 2260.96107784 89% => OK
No of words: 417.0 441.139720559 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82254196643 5.12650576532 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50939496074 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 204.123752495 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.47242206235 0.468620217663 101% => OK
syllable_count: 634.5 705.55239521 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.70958083832 111% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.8473053892 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6308564226 57.8364921388 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.642857143 119.503703932 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7857142857 23.324526521 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 5.70786347227 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.25449101796 171% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.20758483034 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231638989341 0.218282227539 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100715893441 0.0743258471296 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682464481413 0.0701772020484 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145976344009 0.128457276422 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537851705434 0.0628817314937 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 48.3550499002 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.197005988 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.5979740519 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.32208582834 101% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 98.500998004 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 12.3882235529 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.1389221557 122% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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