The argument is riddled with many inconsistencies and contains several false assumptions. It mentions that a surge of homeowners in Corporateville imply its superior status to Middlesburg. However, the reason for the increase could be completely unrelated to this aspect. Corporateville might be a new town and hence the population's relative growth would be more than Middlesburg.
Another assumption that the new town is not urban is incorrect. Corporateville may have become an urban area due to its lower taxes attracting companies and employees to this recently established location. This could be a dampener to the only reason behind the organisation's decision to move headquarters.
A third assumption made by the author is the relation between lower taxes and lower costs of living. This could be true in some cases, however, there might be several reasons for lower taxes such as lack of public transportation systems, or no public healthcare system in the city. These factors would be responsible for making the city more expensive rather than contributing to it being a cheaper option.
The last assumption made by the author that Corporateville is a safe place has no evidence for it. The relatively new environment would mean a lower number of Law and Order officials present which could make it a highly unsafe place to live in.
Clearly, Supercorp didn't make the most informed decision.
- Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated. 16
- Any leader who is quickly and easily influenced by shifts in popular opinion will accomplish little.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In 50
- SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville proves that Corporateville is a superior place to live than Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp's current headquarters. Moreover, Mi 33
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 20, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...place to live in. Clearly, Supercorp didnt make the most informed decision.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, may, so, third, such as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.6327345309 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.9520958084 77% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 11.1786427146 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 28.8173652695 49% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 55.5748502994 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 16.3942115768 55% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1187.0 2260.96107784 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 226.0 441.139720559 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25221238938 5.12650576532 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.56307096286 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09550198004 2.78398813304 111% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 204.123752495 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592920353982 0.468620217663 127% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 705.55239521 53% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.76447105788 57% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.67365269461 60% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 22.8473053892 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6699471041 57.8364921388 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.3076923077 119.503703932 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 23.324526521 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 5.70786347227 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.20758483034 85% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173374175002 0.218282227539 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650626858215 0.0743258471296 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077019790661 0.0701772020484 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980927079055 0.128457276422 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520180101422 0.0628817314937 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.3550499002 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.5979740519 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.32208582834 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 98.500998004 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 12.3882235529 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.1389221557 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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