Twenty years ago, Dr. Field, a noted anthropologist, visited the island of Tertia. Using an observation-centered approach to studying Tertian culture, he concluded from his observations that children in Tertia were reared by an entire village rather than by their own biological parents. Recently another anthropologist, Dr. Karp, visited the group of islands that includes Tertia and used the interview-centered method to study child-rearing practices. In the interviews that Dr. Karp conducted with children living in this group of islands, the children spent much more time talking about their biological parents than about other adults in the village. Dr. Karp decided that Dr. Field's conclusion about Tertian village culture must be invalid. Some anthropologists recommend that to obtain accurate information on Tertian child-rearing practices, future research on the subject should be conducted via the interview-centered method.
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
When studying anthropology there are many aspects of a culture that an anthropoligist can emphasize on. When Dr. Field did his observation- centered approach on Tertian culture, he came accross different findings of the culture. However, through one of the things he noted was the children within the Tertian, culture were reared more by the adults of the village, reather than their biological parents. This statement was based on Dr. Field’s obsevation. Recently, Dr. Karp visited a groups of Islands, in which Tertia happened to be one of them. He conducted a interview-centered method, in which he validated informationg. He concluded the opposite, he noted that the children were talking more about their biological parents, rather than the people of their village. He claims that, Dr. Field’s conclusion was invalid, based on his recent findings. Both of these finding are too obscure, to find a definite conclusion. Yes, another researcg should be conducted, but it should be specific to the island of Tertia, and their children, and both observation, and interview centered apporach should be consiered to get a cogent result in the study.
Although, both studies have similar finiding, their study was to tainted because they were not focused on the same exact findings, and or environmental setting. Dr. Field’s went to observe the Island of Tertia, meaning he most likely was focused on other aspects of the island. Therefore, his sole focus was not on the history of children’s rearing, rather a conclusion he came across, maybe by chance. Also, we are not aware of how many children were interviewed, age, range, gender, or even time of year. There could have been many factors that led to his findings. We also have to consider that this study happened 20 years ago, and it was based off on observation. Culture norms might have been different.
Dr. Karp also went to the island of Tertia, however he observed other islands meaning his findings are different from Dr. Field, who only went to Tertia. Although he was focused on the rearing of children, he is not able to really compare. He did a interviewed-based study, and it is possible that he did it in different islands. In doing this, the study is tainted as well, because there is no comparision among the studies. This is also 20 years later, the responses could have changed based on the culture norms, age of children, island location, and gender. They can compare their findings, but their approach to the topic was not identical, making it difficult to find a underlining conclusion.
In order to find a more concise and specific conclusion, anthropologist should consider staying in the island of Tertia, conduciton both interview and observation centered method and really being specific with the age group, gender, as well the year the study was conducted. Observing culture norms within the children, and perhaps interviewing a family. There are many ways this study could be conducted. Both anthropologist bring a good contrasting background, but in order to find a cogent conclusion, the study needs to resdesigned in a way that the evidence is not obscured.
Anthropology can be a study that is easily swayed, becuase the study of culture can a have a vast amount of information, even when simply observing it. In order to conduct a study to find a specific answer, there need to be a specific question and purpose, and structure in order to keep the asnwer valid. However, in anthropology culture, and cultural norms are always changing, so it is imperative to keep the study in mind.
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Sentence: When studying anthropology there are many aspects of a culture that an anthropoligist can emphasize on.
Error: anthropoligist Suggestion: anthropologist
Sentence: When Dr. Field did his observation- centered approach on Tertian culture, he came accross different findings of the culture.
Error: accross Suggestion: across
Sentence: However, through one of the things he noted was the children within the Tertian, culture were reared more by the adults of the village, reather than their biological parents.
Error: reather Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: This statement was based on Dr. Field's obsevation.
Error: obsevation Suggestion: observation
Sentence: He conducted a interview-centered method, in which he validated informationg.
Error: informationg Suggestion: information
Error: interview-centered Suggestion: interview centered
Sentence: Yes, another researcg should be conducted, but it should be specific to the island of Tertia, and their children, and both observation, and interview centered apporach should be consiered to get a cogent result in the study.
Error: apporach Suggestion: approach
Error: consiered Suggestion: considered
Error: researcg Suggestion: research
Sentence: Although, both studies have similar finiding, their study was to tainted because they were not focused on the same exact findings, and or environmental setting.
Error: finiding Suggestion: finding
Sentence: He did a interviewed-based study, and it is possible that he did it in different islands.
Error: interviewed-based Suggestion: interviewed based
Sentence: In doing this, the study is tainted as well, because there is no comparision among the studies.
Error: comparision Suggestion: comparison
Sentence: In order to find a more concise and specific conclusion, anthropologist should consider staying in the island of Tertia, conduciton both interview and observation centered method and really being specific with the age group, gender, as well the year the study was conducted.
Error: conduciton Suggestion: conduction
Sentence: Both anthropologist bring a good contrasting background, but in order to find a cogent conclusion, the study needs to resdesigned in a way that the evidence is not obscured.
Error: resdesigned Suggestion: redesigned
Sentence: Anthropology can be a study that is easily swayed, becuase the study of culture can a have a vast amount of information, even when simply observing it.
Error: becuase Suggestion: because
Sentence: In order to conduct a study to find a specific answer, there need to be a specific question and purpose, and structure in order to keep the asnwer valid.
Error: asnwer Suggestion: answer
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: ??? out of 6
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 16 2
No. of Sentences: 30 15
No. of Words: 595 350
No. of Characters: 2883 1500
No. of Different Words: 240 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.939 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.845 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.719 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 211 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 162 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 100 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 56 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.833 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.391 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.433 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.288 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.45 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.161 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When studying anthropology there are many as...
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Line 1, column 489, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a group' or simply 'groups'?
Suggestion: a group; groups
... obsevation. Recently, Dr. Karp visited a groups of Islands, in which Tertia happened to...
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Line 1, column 567, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...appened to be one of them. He conducted a interview-centered method, in which he ...
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Line 1, column 777, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ather than the people of their village. He claims that, Dr. Field's conclusio...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e is not able to really compare. He did a interviewed-based study, and it is poss...
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Line 3, column 676, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... identical, making it difficult to find a underlining conclusion. In order to f...
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Line 4, column 427, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'brings'.
Suggestion: brings
...could be conducted. Both anthropologist bring a good contrasting background, but in o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, really, so, therefore, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 19.6327345309 194% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 28.8173652695 180% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 55.5748502994 137% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 16.3942115768 61% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3004.0 2260.96107784 133% => OK
No of words: 595.0 441.139720559 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0487394958 5.12650576532 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.93888872473 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91349276332 2.78398813304 105% => OK
Unique words: 265.0 204.123752495 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445378151261 0.468620217663 95% => OK
syllable_count: 927.0 705.55239521 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 4.96107784431 282% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 8.76447105788 34% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 14.0 1.67365269461 836% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 19.7664670659 152% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.8473053892 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.6719843701 57.8364921388 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.133333333 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8333333333 23.324526521 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1 5.70786347227 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 18.0 4.67664670659 385% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350603939824 0.218282227539 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883987171033 0.0743258471296 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700583627915 0.0701772020484 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194340354922 0.128457276422 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830999297489 0.0628817314937 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.3550499002 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.5979740519 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 98.500998004 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 12.3882235529 69% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.1389221557 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.9071856287 84% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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