The chairperson of the west egg town council claims that landfill in the town will last longer than predicted because of the town's strong commitment to recycling. He gives reasons for his claim which are not very strong and to make a convincing case he needs to provide strong evidence.
Firstly, the author needs to state that the recycling activity that is been done by residents is enough for the landfill to last long. It is possible that out of the total garbage produced by the town only 1% was been recycled and that in last two years it has increased to 2%. Thus we see that in proporiton to the total garbage a very little amount is recycled which is not enough to claim that landfill will last longer than predicted.
Secondly, The author states that recycling activity will increase from next month as the pickup cost of garbage from household is going to double. However, we dont know that doubling be cost is going to make the residents recycle more. For example, If the residents are rich and the doubling of cost does not bother them, then the amount of recylced material will remain same. Thus the author needs to state the current pick up cost of garbage and the overall income of all the households to make his claim convincing.
Third, the author has not given the sample size of this survey which states that 90% respondents said that they would do more recycling. If the towms total population is 100 thousand and the author's sample space contained only 100 people out of which 90 said yes they would recycle, then it is not a sunstantial evidence to be believed. Also auhor needs to provide the information about the class of people he used as sample size. What if most of the people belonged to upper class who are aware of recycling and its benefits. The people from lower class might have a opposite opinion and this makes authors claim weak.
In addition, the life of landfill is not only depended on amount of garbade that is been recylced. It also depends on number of other factors like temperature, soil condition, moisture content and leacheate produced from the landfill. Thus the authors claim that landfills life will increase just by reducing the amount of garbage by recycling most of the amount is not reseaonable.
To make a stronger case the author needs to provide statistical data and a survey conducted on large sample size with various classes of society.
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Essay evaluation report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.5 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 422 350
No. of Characters: 1943 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.532 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.604 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.329 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 130 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 64 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 31 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.444 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.112 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.722 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.326 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.463 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.138 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: WAS_BEEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'was' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: was; has been
...al garbage produced by the town only 1% was been recycled and that in last two years it ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 278, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... last two years it has increased to 2%. Thus we see that in proporiton to the total ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...usehold is going to double. However, we dont know that doubling be cost is going to ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... of recylced material will remain same. Thus the author needs to state the current p...
^^^^
Line 4, column 337, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... a sunstantial evidence to be believed. Also auhor needs to provide the information ...
^^^^
Line 4, column 566, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... The people from lower class might have a opposite opinion and this makes authors...
^
Line 5, column 236, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...d leacheate produced from the landfill. Thus the authors claim that landfills life w...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thus, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.9520958084 62% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 13.6137724551 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 55.5748502994 101% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1982.0 2260.96107784 88% => OK
No of words: 422.0 441.139720559 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69668246445 5.12650576532 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.56307096286 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39711123437 2.78398813304 86% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 204.123752495 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.454976303318 0.468620217663 97% => OK
syllable_count: 603.0 705.55239521 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59920159681 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 19.7664670659 91% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.8473053892 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5773803325 57.8364921388 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 110.111111111 119.503703932 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 23.324526521 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.55555555556 5.70786347227 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 6.88822355289 29% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149638174143 0.218282227539 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509711415672 0.0743258471296 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392990675864 0.0701772020484 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0722674349608 0.128457276422 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044601392151 0.0628817314937 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.3799401198 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 48.3550499002 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.197005988 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 98.500998004 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 12.3882235529 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.1389221557 101% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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