Sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them.in return for the millions of dollars that they are paidwe should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibilty.-write a response in whi

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Sports stars and movie stars have an obligation to behave as role models for the young people who look up to them.in return for the millions of dollars that they are paidwe should expect them to fulfill this societal responsibilty.-write a response in which discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.

Stars are indisputably icon for the whole world either it is spots stars or movie stars.They are quintessentially of our various activities and social responsibilities.As they are elligible for that position the normal public surmise them as superstar,role model etc.They are paid a huge amount og money so people expect the maximum good behaviour,social activities,responsibilites.To maintain the emperial of media they have to compromise about many things,also a routine work.Besides their job they have a another world,where they are very much important.

Stars are beholden to their judge, i mean public.There are some criteria have to be maintained by them.For example, they have to be confident,trustworthy,truthful. But sometimes, they behave like they are obdurate, untrustworthy, deceitful, liar, capricious, arrogant, jealousy, impatient etc. Sometimes htey are contentious and sometimes they failed to have self-restraint and sexual chastity.They have to concious about dress also. Media,whatever it is press media or virtual media theyalways make a trap to grab them so that those behaviour sometimes disclosed infront of the world.In olympic games, stars have to be careful because some people take illegal way so that they perform very well lile they take energatic drinks or alcohol type drinks.But obviously they are caught red handed in dope test.So that he or she becomes revoked for olympic.Celebreties life is full of name and fame.Some times they behave like enigmatic.Some movie stars opress with some animals & so they are indicted.

As they are paid millions of dollars they have to fulfill social responsibilities.Some celebreties arrange a charity show instead of taking money,some stars do some advertisement so that people are aware from smoking.Some build an institution whether it is educational instituiton like school-college or it is hospital.Some stars build organization like anti-cancer or opthalmological institute.

Finally, it is very important to behave like stars as they are super model,role model.icon to the whole world as they are paid a big amount.The big amount of budget of economy is in their home so it is surely to behave like icon to us.

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Sentence: Stars are indisputably icon for the whole world either it is spots stars or movie stars.
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Sentence: Besides their job they have a another world, where they are very much important.
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Sentence: As they are elligible for that position the normal public surmise them as superstar,role model etc. They are paid a huge amount og money so people expect the maximum good behaviour, social activities, responsibilites.
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Sentence: To maintain the emperial of media they have to compromise about many things, also a routine work.
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Sentence: But sometimes, they behave like they are obdurate, untrustworthy, deceitful, liar, capricious, arrogant, jealousy, impatient etc.Sometimes htey are contentious and sometimes they failed to have self-restraint and sexual chastity.They have to concious about dress also.
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Sentence: Media,whatever it is press media or virtual media theyalways make a trap to grab them so that those behaviour sometimes disclosed infront of the world.
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Sentence: In olympic games, stars have to be careful because some people take illegal way so that they perform very well lile they take energatic drinks or alcohol type drinks.
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Sentence: Some movie stars opress with some animals & so they are indicted.
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Error: opress Suggestion: press

Sentence: As they are paid millions of dollars they have to fulfill social responsibilities.Some celebreties arrange a charity show instead of taking money, some stars do some advertisement so that people are aware from smoking.Some build an institution whether it is educational instituiton like school-college or it is hospital.
Error: instituiton Suggestion: institution
Error: celebreties Suggestion: celebrities

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