1.Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and sup

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1. Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

A great strength of educational institutions is their ability to allow students to explore different subjects. From a young age, students are encouraged to study material ranging from science to social studies. Encouraging this exploration is not an attempt to get students to find what they’re good at and just continue with that; it is an attempt for students to experience the breadth of learning. It is this breadth that develops a student’s critical thinking and analytical skills, qualities that are fundamental to future success. To curtail such a broad exploration would mean to hinder the ability of students to pick up life skills and further discover their abilities. Hence, educational institutions should not dissuade students from pursuing fields in which they are unlikely to succeed.

It just so happens that a student’s ability to succeed in a particular field is highly correlated with their age. A student that does not excel at Economics in high school, might later become more perceptive to it in college. On the other hand, a student that is good at Math in high-school, may become unable to bear the rigor associated with college level Math. If an institution were to discourage the former student from pursuing Economics in college as a result of their poor Economics acumen in high-school, they would be hindering their ability to discover their future interests and positively contribute towards society in the future. Take a look at Richard Thaler, for example. In his book Misbehaving, he opens up about how as a non-tenured professor, he spent most of his time discovering the field of Behavioral Economics. At the time, Behavioral Economics was a new field and it was risky for him to focus the majority of his time towards this single area of interest. Although he was dissuaded by colleagues to pursue this route, he did not stop. If he had given up, would he have won the Nobel prize today? Thaler might have been able to overcome the dissuasion, but others might not be as impregnable. Dissuading such students might actually be detrimental to their growth and success.

To add to the above argument, one might consider the increasing importance of analytical thinking, perseverance, and determination. If schools dissuade students from pursuing what they might not succeed in, they are setting a precedent for “giving up” in the future. Students will tend to believe that it is okay to give up if they are not excelling at something. This will prevent that from persevering and thinking about ideas that confound them, skills that are extremely relevant to jobs in industry. If schools were to prevent the development of these skills, they would only be contributing to creating a pool of future job candidates that are not equipped with the ability to think about difficult problems and overcome obstacles.

Although I argue that it is necessary for schools to encourage students to explore various fields and serve as a guide in the development of necessary life skills, one might argue that dissuasion could also have positive effects. Let us take Mark Zuckerberg as an example. It was only after he got to Harvard that he realized that school wasn’t for him. He must have excelled at school to get into Harvard, but it took him awhile to realize that it was not within a school environment that he would succeed. If schools were to encourage more people in his situation to follow what they are good at rather than spend more time slogging through what they are not successful at, we might end up with more stories like Zuckerberg’s.

In sum, it is a part of an educational institution’s mission to encourage students to take academic risks and really delve into fields before making a choice to settle within one. If these very institutions were to discourage students from simply learning and instead encourage them to only focus on what they will succeed in, we are likely to end up with future generations that lack the ability to critically think and overcome obstacles. It is important to teach the future workforce the benefits of exploration, perseverance, and hard work, rather than to give them a pass to pursue only what they are strong at.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, look, may, really, so, while, for example, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.5258426966 179% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.3162921348 168% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 33.0505617978 239% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 121.0 58.6224719101 206% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3540.0 2235.4752809 158% => OK
No of words: 705.0 442.535393258 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02127659574 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.15284737739 4.55969084622 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91510792814 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 315.0 215.323595506 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.446808510638 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1113.3 704.065955056 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 6.24550561798 256% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.77640449438 225% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8795179228 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 23.4991977007 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 10.2758426966 204% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19068725548 0.243740707755 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0595500669281 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793528448242 0.0758088955206 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123723652261 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057970969063 0.0667264976115 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 146.0 100.480337079 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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