1. To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Leaders, economists, artists and scientists have to make decisions about their country every single day to improve the nation's circumstances. But it requires great knowledge and understanding on the keystones of not only their society but also other societies to have effective choices. At this point, the perspectives on how to find the correct and important characteristics of a society play influential role. One of them is to choose a population sample to examine the characteristics but this idea leads authorities to two main different ways. Some thinks that population sample must be the people in the rural side while others think major cities must be investigated for the purpose. Looking closely to major cities and how they affect the country in the developed ages, I believe that nation's culture are created, improved and preserved in the major cities. So, to have an understanding of most important characteristics of a society, one must study the major cities.
To begin with, high percentage of the society live in the major cities of the country. Since society's culture is a metric to understand the characterists of the society and shaped through the interaction between large number of diversed people, major cities are full of art galleries, musical events, historical museums and economic activities. For example, United Kingdom is one of the strongest and most diversed countries in the world. So, what are the economic activities of the country that define itself in the world? They are mostly the financial services, IT businesses, trade and movie making firms. While one inspects these activities, one can see that almost the 80% of these activities are created in London, which is one of the major cities of the country. London represents the United Kingdom by hosting variety of people both belonging the different nations all over the globe and the many citizens of the Kingdom. Therefore, with the purpose of living together and earning money, majority of people creates common ideas for a living by intense communicating and sharing, which leads mentioned activities to become a part of the whole nation. Moreover, this is also true for the activities other than the economic ones. People use their spare time for spiritual reasons such as: improving oneself, learning, teaching, relaxing or reflecting. In the end, creations like paintings, sculpture, music or cuisine come to surface and tell a story about the owners. Since major cities have the most of interactions in the country, these productions mirror the way of living of the nation.
In addition to this, major cities have an accumulation of cultures because they have the longest and most involved history. These kinds of cities experienced the empires, wars, crisis, hunger or migrations. For example, Istanbul has a long history and is one of the biggest cities in world to the extent that it has more people than the whole population of Greece, Sweden or Belgium. Known for the Greek name at the time, Bosphorus, hosted Byzantium colony, Alexander the Great, Byzantine Empire and Turkey followed by Ottoman Empire. This is a history of almost 3000 years. Each societies lived in the city left a legacy with paintings, architecture, beliefs and the stories telling about the people. Hence, generations after the predecessors built on these legacies and improved the culture. Since society had years to embrace and follow the culture, these values distributed the whole society and people strongly hold on to them. While looking to Istanbul, the things mostly stand out are the mosques and churches. Actually, this defines one of the most characteristics of the Turkish people. Before Ottoman Empire, Byzantine Empire built sacred places to follow their beliefs for years. When Istanbul was conquered by Fatih Sultan Mehmet in 15th century, they started building mosques to help people to follow their religions. Yet, they did not destroy the previous sacred places. Through years, this became an important matter for the country and now Turkish people are known for being very sensitive with the beliefs and respecting the diversed religions in the country.
On the opposite side, many people believe that rural areas must be studied to understand the characteristics of a society because these are the places where people live an isolated life and protects their way of living. If this was said in an era that countries were not developed other than agriculture and husbandry, rural areas would reflect the culture of the society because those were the places including most of the people creating the culture and mentioned activities were the only activities for economic revenue. Unfortunately, in the modern world, this generalization is fallacious due to increased connectedness, migration and other economic activities. To be clear, rural areas are the number one places where people migrate from. Thus, they cannot keep people to carry on the cultures they have in those places. Also, rural areas have the Internet connection and mobile reception keeping them exposed to global interactions, which proves that they are not isolated anymore. Shortly, rural places are not creating or improving the culture of the society in developed ages.
In conclusion, to comprehend the most important characteristics of a society, one must look at the places having a long history, and most of the people in the country living and creating. Rural areas driving the society is a phenomena stayed in the beginning of the history where people only had a simple living due to undeveloped relations and activities. Major cities provide societys a historically grown culture and an opportunity to have many and diversed people interacting all at once so that creating and improving the culture which builds the characteristics of the nation.
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Suggestion: All
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 19.5258426966 154% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 42.0 14.8657303371 283% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.3162921348 150% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 123.0 58.6224719101 210% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 10.0 12.9106741573 77% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4892.0 2235.4752809 219% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 939.0 442.535393258 212% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20979765708 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.53562163556 4.55969084622 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.782217925 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 404.0 215.323595506 188% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430244941427 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1559.7 704.065955056 222% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 4.38483146067 365% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 43.0 20.2370786517 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9845152498 60.3974514979 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.76744186 118.986275619 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8372093023 23.4991977007 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41860465116 5.21951772744 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 24.0 10.2758426966 234% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 16.0 4.83258426966 331% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218717838763 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592052661095 0.0831039109588 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111629788997 0.0758088955206 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155226683943 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953880442247 0.0667264976115 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 14.1392134831 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 220.0 100.480337079 219% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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