89. Claim: Many problems of modern society cannot be solved by laws and the legal system.
Reason: Laws cannot change what is in people's hearts or minds.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim and the reason on which that claim is based.
The purpose of law is to justify morality and lead the society towards uniform flourishment and virtuousness; and the mission of legal system is to illuminate somehow esoteric laws to the public and practice them to the ambiguous reality. Since most problems of modern society derive from moral depravity and conflicts between separate culture and religion, namely dissensions between separate ethics. Laws and the legal system can solve them by setting an obligatory standard and explain why it is the most justified and prudent. Granted that people’s hearts and minds are hard to change, mutual understanding is achievable by the guidance of laws, for they have the power to transform people’s moral certitude. For example, a law against revenge will stir up the examination on the propriety of vengeance.
Laws and the legal system can form an environment in which people can pursue welfare and virtuous without worrying being exploited by the malevolent and decadent. Selfishness is human nature. Though the belief in religion can relent the evil impulses, the encroachment of commercialization and the inveteracy of original sin still constitute the tendency to depravity. In 2004, a hurricane attacked Florida. Some merchants in the afflicted area seized the opportunity out of their business acumen, raising the price of commodities by at least ten times. Their minds were so warped by the fetish for wealth that they even decided to capitalize on people’s hardship and misery. No wonder that many Floridians were aggravated by the inflated prices and sued those greedy merchants. Since Florida has a law against price gouging, most verdicts were in the plaintiff’s favor. Although the inflation of price of this kind are vehemently defended by economists on the name of free markets, the motives that embodied the despicable avarice is intolerable by law. So next time in an analogous circumstance, inflation will not occur, for prudence will tell those businessmen not to take the risk to violate laws and degrade themselves by manifesting their greediness. When the society is filled with incentives to entice people to the hell of decadence, when the powerless people become the prey of miscreants, laws and the legal system are the most effectual means to protect the innocent and lead the society to order and virtuousness.
Laws and the legal system indicate what the society values, thus provide opposite camps a hint to achieve mutual understanding. Same-sex marriage is one the most contentious problem of modern society. It represents the conflicts between conservative Christians and liberals. But in the thoughtful and nuanced opinion written by Marshall, chief justice of Massachusetts Supreme Court, in the same-sex marriage case, the reason why the state admit same-sex marriage is unequivocally explained. She pointed out that the essence of marriage is the deeply personal commitment to another human being and a lightly public celebration of the idea of mutuality, companionship, intimacy, fidelity, and family. Since same-sex marriage unarguably complies with the given idea, it should be permitted by the government. Such a sound opinion will render most opponent ceasing of themselves. Granted that they may still cleave to their religious belief, but their prudence will tell them to accept that sentiment instead of being injudicious. A country is inevitably awash with conflicting thoughts; and they can hardly subside by themselves. So laws and the legal system have the obligation to mediate in the disputes and prevent confliction from escalating.
In the perspective of economists, laws and stringent law enforcement can promote mutual trust and thus economy and citizens’ welfare. The deficiency of trust among society is perhaps the bleakest fact in the modern society. Although people get materially wealthier, the loss of trust is agonizing and hard to repair. The harshness of laws and its enforcement deter the evil and reassure citizens with comfort, for they know the others will conform with rules they all approve of. Many former colonies are still stuck in poverty despite that they have been modernizing for decades. Defective law enforcement elicits bribery and corruption; and ensues the distrust on governments and companies. Statistics have shown if there are two communities identical in almost all respects, higher productivity appears in the community where its members trust each other. People in such community are more willing to invest and consume with their income, so the society as a whole accumulates more capital.
Laws and the legal system form an environment that encourages mutual understanding, trust and virtuousness, in which people can enjoy a safer and more carefree life. They are not only the necessary evil of modern society but also the means to solve societal problems and promote welfare for the society at large.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 27, Rule ID: FROM_FORM[4]
Message: Did you mean 'from'?
Suggestion: from
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, thus, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 45.0 14.8657303371 303% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 33.0505617978 115% => OK
Preposition: 105.0 58.6224719101 179% => OK
Nominalization: 25.0 12.9106741573 194% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4158.0 2235.4752809 186% => OK
No of words: 773.0 442.535393258 175% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37904269082 5.05705443957 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.27284340265 4.55969084622 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94080602566 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 388.0 215.323595506 180% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501940491591 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 1302.3 704.065955056 185% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 3.10617977528 258% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 36.0 20.2370786517 178% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2632279403 60.3974514979 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 118.986275619 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4722222222 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.61111111111 5.21951772744 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.2758426966 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.13820224719 292% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241058063706 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550533496484 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464566554776 0.0758088955206 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147499352927 0.150359130593 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292417583209 0.0667264976115 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.38706741573 115% => OK
difficult_words: 242.0 100.480337079 241% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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