In this age of intensive media coverage, it is no longer possible for a society to regard any living man or woman as a hero.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Hero provides a role model for society: they exemplified the human's capability of doing good without considering himself/herself first. With the increased media coverage, the prompted stated that hero is no long possible. On the contrary, I believed the availability of the media should in fact promotes hero among society for two reasons.
To begin, the easy access to story and news eased with the current increased media connectivity available, thus should better echo and promote a heroic story of a man or woman. With today's technology and connectivity present, such a instances can spread in instances. erotic stand against government's reluctantto resolve global warming issue from a girl can heard across in the global instateinously. Rallies and contests from variety of race formed to demand the government according to this hero. After the dust is settles, rapid changes was seen from both the industry and government: Robert Bosch announced to aim for carbon-neutral within 2025, Google announced to increased funding towards environment start-ups. Such as intrepid act from a small nine-years-old girl bring about changes to world is nothing short of an act of the hero. And, the increased media coverage made it possible.
Further, as superman relied on his supernatural senses to find the troubled issue that he could help with, hero needs to process the awareness of the issue that he coud possible aids and bring changes to. Logically, if one is not aware of the sanitary issue in Africa, he/she wouldn't start bring changes to Africa. With the abundant of the media, these issue or conflict can easier reached and thus provides more opportunity for society to act upon which in turn give raise to extraordinary change and hero.
Although media tends to project the world as chaotic with conflicts, racism and, terrorism and give no opportunity for hero, hero still exist today and it's with this information of the issue we are facing that allows changes, along with the man or woman responsible which we called as hero.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...model for society: they exemplified the humans capability of doing good without consid...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... society for two reasons. To begin, the easy access to story and news eased ...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...chnology and connectivity present, such a instances can spread in instances. erot...
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Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a instance' or simply 'instances'?
Suggestion: a instance; instances
...chnology and connectivity present, such a instances can spread in instances. erotic stand a...
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Line 5, column 270, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Erotic
...ch a instances can spread in instances. erotic stand against governments reluctantto r...
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Line 9, column 277, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...of the sanitary issue in Africa, he/she wouldnt start bring changes to Africa. With the...
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Line 13, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...an responsible which we called as hero.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, thus, in fact, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 19.5258426966 31% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 14.8657303371 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1718.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 333.0 442.535393258 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15915915916 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77338342455 2.79657885939 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0200757491 60.3974514979 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.714285714 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 5.21951772744 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221774644151 0.243740707755 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732736657923 0.0831039109588 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672783906917 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150637119085 0.150359130593 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619021369655 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.1392134831 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.