All too often, companies hire outside consultants to suggest ways for the company to operate more efficiently. If companies were to spend more time listening to their own employees, such consultants would be unnecessary.
THE BANK, THE WOMAN AND THE PSYCHIATRIST
"Good morning ladies and gentlemen, I hereby submit this proposal which would further foister the the already established public image of our dear company. I am suggesting that the Guaranty Trust bank(GTB), Lekki penninsula branch employ the notable psychiatrist, Professor Owoeye O.A, a senior consultant at the Federal Neuro-Psychiatric Hospital, Yaba. He will be employed to visit the bank on occasional bases..."
This is the opening remark of the Chief Executive Officer of GTB in Africa's most populous nation, Nigeria. The bank is arguably the most popular among the teeming youths of the nation, especially, University students.
The prompt of this examination simply wants us to establish the reason why a company will hire consultants that would enhance their operation, make them work more efficienly. We can decode this message by referring to the introduction above.
One day, an old woman, in her 60's decided to close down her account details in the bank. She want to do this in order to receive a sum of 2.5 million naira in cash. Then and there, she was denied of this because the bank will lose their place in the stock market and possibly be delisted by the Central Bank of Nigeria, headed by the CBN Governor, Godwin Emefiele. The woman remain calm until it became unbearable. With a medical history of Bipolar disorder, she started eliciting manic symptoms. At this point, Prof. Owoeye entered the banking hall and he not only prescribed I.M haldol 10mg stat and I.V diazepam 20mg stat, he encourage the bank to contact her family right away. The woman never recovered from the manic symptoms. Today, she is labelled "pharmacobaddest" by the street urchins.
This story is cogent to the prompt at hand. We can learn three things. Firstly, the bank was right to employ the psychiatrist. Had it been that they did not do that, they would have mistook the woman for another customer who is lousy and only wants to be showy. The psychiatrist saved the day, he ensured that the woman is stablised with the above prescription. However, one may argue that he went to the extreme by advising the bank to contact her family. The family members knows that she was a psychiatric patient, hence, they consent to the advice that the woman be admitted into Federal Neuro-psychiatric Hospital, Yaba, Lagos. At the hospital emergency, patients spend only three days, however, since she has a file there, she was admitted directly into one of the female wards. She, however escaped and later became what the street urchins know her for.
In addition, we can also infer from the story that, the bank was wrong to employ Dr Owoeye. The bank staffs might have resolved the matter before the arrival of the psychiatrist. Had it been that attended to the request of the woman, she might have left the premise peacefully before the arrival of Dr Owoeye. Hence, banks should not only protect their image to the public, but also protect the rights of their customers. Companies, generally should ensure that they put the patient right first. Had it been the customer at the bank is an eighteen year-old and a prosp, they would have been in big trouble.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...is proposal which would further foister the the already established public image of our...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...is proposal which would further foister the the already established public image of our...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...otable psychiatrist, Professor Owoeye O.A, a senior consultant at the Federal Neu...
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Line 17, column 94, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'She' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...wn her account details in the bank. She want to do this in order to receive a sum of...
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Line 17, column 580, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...nking hall and he not only prescribed I.M haldol 10mg stat and I.V diazepam 20mg ...
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Line 17, column 605, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...y prescribed I.M haldol 10mg stat and I.V diazepam 20mg stat, he encourage the ba...
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Line 17, column 630, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'encourages'.
Suggestion: encourages
...0mg stat and I.V diazepam 20mg stat, he encourage the bank to contact her family right aw...
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Line 21, column 183, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'mistaken'.
Suggestion: mistaken
...t they did not do that, they would have mistook the woman for another customer who is l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, may, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 33.0505617978 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 58.6224719101 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2695.0 2235.4752809 121% => OK
No of words: 542.0 442.535393258 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97232472325 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82502781895 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74238331549 2.79657885939 98% => OK
Unique words: 290.0 215.323595506 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535055350554 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 809.1 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 6.24550561798 304% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.38483146067 160% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.2370786517 148% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.3535948039 60.3974514979 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8333333333 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.21951772744 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0775409722996 0.243740707755 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0174095037878 0.0831039109588 21% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409320913503 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0444938591623 0.150359130593 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576764762019 0.0667264976115 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 100.480337079 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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