Although sound moral judgment is an important characteristic of an effective leader, it is not as important as a leader’s ability to maintain the respect of his or her peers.
I believe that having sound moral judgment and maintaining the respect of one's peers are connected to each other and one cannot exist without the other. Therefore I will have to disagree with the statement that implies that respect of the peers of a leader is more important than having sound moral judgment.
A leader holds a lot of power in his hand and his or her ability to use this soundly and morally is what makes them effective. A leader who doesn't possess sound moral judgment will definitely not be able to take correct as well brave decisions to keep all of his peers safe and sound without landing them in travel. It is of paramount importance that a leader knows how to distinguish right from wrong no matter the circumstance. Great leaders like Mahatma Gandhi could have easily retaliated against the British with violence. But Mahatma Gandhi's moral judgment prevailed and he choose to lead his peers on the path of nonviolence in retaliation. This proved pivotal in not only helping India attain its freedom but also helping Mahatma Gandhi earn the respect of his fellow comrades, peers, and the general masses.
Sound moral judgment is an integral part of the skill set of a leader and although there have been instances of respect becoming more important than sound moral judgment it has often led to that leader's downfall eventually. Taking the case of Adolf Hitler, originally he managed to earn the respect of his peers but didn't have any moral judgment. However, over time his peers felt isolated and discouraged by his far-fetched ideas leading them aimlessly into a war that they were bound to lose. It culminated in fact to the extent that his own deputy betrayed him to end the war.
Leaders are often people who we look up to in times of crisis and how he or she manages to lead us from there is what makes or breaks them. A leader who has sound judgment can more often than not lead his team out of that crisis thereby earning the respect of his peers. Taking the example of Martin Luther King, who ably lead America out of slavery with his incredible decision-making skills coupled with sound judgment. His moral compass was impeccable and that's what helped him earn save thousands of lives.
Thus it proves that a leader who doesn't have sound judgment can prove to be catastrophic to his very people even if he or she manages to earn respect for a little while. On the other hand, a leader who possesses sound judgment might not get very popular initially but over time will impress his peers and earn their respect.
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
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Message: The proper name in singular (Gandhi) must be used with a third-person verb: 'earns'.
Suggestion: earns
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Message: Use simply 'comrades'.
Suggestion: comrades
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'leaders'' or 'leader's'?
Suggestion: leaders'; leader's
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Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 14.8657303371 135% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 33.0505617978 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 58.6224719101 101% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 449.0 442.535393258 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70155902004 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39270580022 2.79657885939 86% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501113585746 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 648.0 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 23.0359550562 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.16553747 60.3974514979 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 117.277777778 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9444444444 23.4991977007 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.21951772744 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 7.80617977528 141% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434405595479 0.243740707755 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144820589573 0.0831039109588 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0955989755692 0.0758088955206 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263172930427 0.150359130593 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727410935336 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.1392134831 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 48.8420337079 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.1639044944 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.2143820225 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.