In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The author of the issue states that past experiences play an important role in every single facet of people lives and without it we are not able to make a sound decision. Due to the controversial nature of this question there is not a general argument on this issue. I am, however, to a great extent of the conviction that everything that has happened in the past in any field, could be the best teacher for every human beings. So, people will definitely enable to build their desire based on their achievements in the past. In the ensuing paragraphs some convincing reasons will be delineated to collaborate my personal stance.
By and large, it is established beyond doubt that people is affected by happening that they experience. Indeed, people confront different trials and tribulations in their everyday life and there are various conditions that happen for them day in day out. In this case, they mature when they cope with these kinds of situation and will be able to think wisely. To elucidate more on this issue, past events and experiences form a fundamental part of a persons' life. As far as I am concerned, past achievements make human beings decide their path and make a wise decision. Not until people make a decision based on their experiences can they progress and flourish in their everyday life. As a tangible example, vast majorities of people who have been affected by their past events, have been more successful not only in their personal life but also in their career because they were on the conviction that past events are a bridge to future.
Another reason that cannot go unnoticed is that researches have shown that successful people have always built their life based on their previous knowledge. Broadly speaking, in today's hectic world many people run into huge problems and if people do not refer to their past events, they will not address those problems effectively and quickly. To delve further into the issue, success is one of the utmost important life goals, which myriads of people bend over backwards to reach. As a matter of fact, success is consist of previous knowledge, events and life difficulties that come in various forms and shapes and also hardly ever can people reach their pinnacle of their life without learning about past.
However what I alluded to above cannot be overgeneralized to all contexts. Alongside with the innumerable benefits it has, indisputably, although previous events play a significant role in individual's way of living, it is willpower that determine whether people are successful or not. In fact, crowds of people experience many defeats in their life and they expect to win after several defeats. But it is not accessible unless people make an effort until get the best results. As a corollary, it is hard-working attitude that have great influence on people lives and determine if they are successful or not. Nevertheless, it does not make those preceding benefits pale.
In light of the reasons elaborated, I reiterate that previous achievement form a basic part of any human being's life and make people decide their path. Indeed, past knowledge provide fertile ground for people to make a sound decision and not to do something wrong in their future life. In addition, previous events provide an opportunity for people to experience success even after several defeats. I highly suggest that people should learn completely about their past and keep going based on those experiences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experiences'.
Suggestion: experiences
The author of the issue states that past experiences play an important role in every single ...
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Line 3, column 451, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...xperiences form a fundamental part of a persons life. As far as I am concerned, past a...
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Line 5, column 515, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'consisted'.
Suggestion: consisted
... reach. As a matter of fact, success is consist of previous knowledge, events and life ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...r life without learning about past. However what I alluded to above cannot be overg...
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Line 9, column 106, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'beings'' or 'being's'?
Suggestion: beings'; being's
...ievement form a basic part of any human beings life and make people decide their path....
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Line 9, column 513, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... keep going based on those experiences.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'broadly speaking', 'in addition', 'in fact', 'as a matter of fact', 'by and large', 'to a great extent']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.228706624606 0.240241500013 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.165615141956 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0946372239748 0.0880659088768 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0599369085174 0.0497285424764 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0646687697161 0.0444667217837 145% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.134069400631 0.12292977631 109% => OK
Participles: 0.0315457413249 0.0406280797675 78% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.66495957052 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0268138801262 0.030933414821 87% => OK
Particles: 0.00157728706625 0.0016655270985 95% => OK
Determiners: 0.0725552050473 0.0997080785238 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0157728706625 0.0249443105267 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0141955835962 0.0148568991511 96% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3476.0 2732.02544248 127% => OK
No of words: 580.0 452.878318584 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.99310344828 6.0361032391 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90746259869 4.58838876751 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.356896551724 0.366273622748 97% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243103448276 0.280924506359 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175862068966 0.200843997647 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.11724137931 0.132149295362 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66495957052 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 271.0 219.290929204 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46724137931 0.48968727796 95% => OK
Word variations: 56.3318203718 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 22.3076923077 23.380412469 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.9386650518 59.4972553346 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.692307692 141.124799967 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 23.380412469 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.461538461538 0.674092028746 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 46.6180371353 51.4728631049 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.35869565217 1.64882698954 82% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291428120853 0.391690518653 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0892398931061 0.123202303941 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.068294093845 0.077325440228 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.479993492026 0.547984918172 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.115346521171 0.149214159877 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112405816218 0.161403998019 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605081937443 0.0892212321368 68% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.396269548258 0.385218514788 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0677680628619 0.0692045440612 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212689883667 0.275328986314 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0681149662733 0.0653680567796 104% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 10.4325221239 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88274336283 82% => OK
Positive topic words: 17.0 7.22455752212 235% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 24.0 13.5995575221 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 79.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.75 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.