Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.
The 20th and 21th centuries are characterized by all the momentous changes, which have been made in human's lives. Perhaps the most milestone of these two centuries are the rules that any given society enact for its members and expect to behave based on them. Various points of view which are germane to the matter being discussed brings us to the moot question as to whether in today's hectic city of life, the rules in all societies are stricter and more difficult to obey. However, the popular sentiment to which I vehemently cling is that nowadays people in the society are freer than past time and now they do everything they want without being criticized for their behavior. The following paragraphs will aptly substantiate my personal stance.
To commence with, it is established beyond doubt that welfare of people living in every given society is of utmost importance and members of a society always face a challenge when it comes to strict rules by the society, since the dawn of civilization. Generally phrased, it is the people's right to act freely in the society and if a nation legislates strict rules, it might have negative effects on the behavior of individuals. As a tangible example, in the past societies expect students to receive excellent scores and always kept in step with their peers when it comes to competition. In such situation, not only will students lose their interest toward higher education but also will increase dropout rate drastically. In fact, we have to give people the right to act based on their own logic but not far from general rules in the society. To elucidate more on this issue, today, human beings have more freedom and this freedom could provide an opportunity for any given society to make a progress day in day out.
Another equally salient point in corroborating my stance is the fact that as humans' understanding and appreciation go further, it is necessarily needed to give people more freedom and let them think and act freely. If we take a minute ponder over it, people in the past did not have the right to argue about a political or economic situation and if they did so, they might be confronted specific punishment. But nowadays, people castigate and blame even political leaders regularly. The startling fact that flabbergasted me is the fact that people say everything they want arrogantly without being arrested by the government. It can be deduced from a combination of breadth of coverage and depth of details that today's rules are not stricter than past time and hardly humans complain about difficult rules.
However, every coin has two sides. In today's hectic world, many societies ratify stricter rules than past in order to control and handle the situation. For instance, today's governments are hungry for power and ambitious. So, they do not respect to the people's right because they are of the opinion that power is in people's hands and stricter rules will circumscribe their freedom. However, it was a story in a nutshell; actually, there are more reasonable grounds that can lend weight to my personal view.
In light of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...iscussed brings us to the moot question as to whether in todays hectic city of life, the rule...
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...ys people in the society are freer than past time and now they do everything they want wi...
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...that todays rules are not stricter than past time and hardly humans complain about diffic...
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... of reasons elaborated, I reiterate that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, as to, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 77.0 52.1666666667 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2616.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 531.0 407.700716846 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92655367232 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80035803286 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64000847311 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 212.727598566 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508474576271 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 826.2 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9448950687 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.909090909 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1363636364 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.45110844103 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209308810319 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055266508683 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431654841671 0.0737576698707 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101499279229 0.150856017488 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617074912875 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 86.8835125448 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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