"Experience is the best teacher", everyone wishes to achieve greater heights in their respective field, many of them look up to the milestones which are set by the stalwart in their particular field and consider those achievements as a motivation to thrive.some creates their own path and stood out in their respective fields. In my opinion to achieve greater heights, it is paramount to see the milestones in the particular field, which will create a positive attitude towards achieving that goal.
Inspirations will solidify your thoughts, Inspiration improves creativity and drives with a positive attitude to achieve a goal. for instance being myself as an example, from my childhood i was inspired by former india president Dr.A.P.J.Abdul kalam, I was inspired by the fact he was not only the president and also was an eminent scientist, who contributed for the successful indian Space missions.I got fascinated by his autobiography called "wings of fire",which molds me as a wholesome man by his arduous struggles to come up as a good position in his life. he was a inspirational leader to the entire nation India. he influenced me to aspire to become a scientist.
secondly, the key innovations in any field were achieved by look up the achievements which was done earlier in that field.
for example the first generation of computer was with a huge
- The following appeared in a letter to the school board in the town of Centerville."All students should be required to take the driver's education course at Centerville High School. In the past two years, several accidents in and around Centerville have in 50
- As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoni 75
- “Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places” 70
- Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could. Write a response in chich you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the 16
- In any field of endeavor, it is impossible to make a significant contribution without first being strongly influenced by past achievements within that field. 16
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... a positive attitude to achieve a goal. for instance being myself as an example, f...
^^^
Line 3, column 170, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for instance being myself as an example, from my childhood i was inspired by form...
^^
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...yself as an example, from my childhood i was inspired by former india president ...
^
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...s inspired by former india president Dr.A.P.J.Abdul kalam, I was inspired by the ...
^
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Abdul
...ired by former india president Dr.A.P.J.Abdul kalam, I was inspired by the fact he wa...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 402, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...or the successful indian Space missions.I got fascinated by his autobiography cal...
^
Line 3, column 472, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...ography called 'wings of fire',which molds me as a wholesome man by his ardu...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...come up as a good position in his life. he was a inspirational leader to the enti...
^^
Line 3, column 582, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... as a good position in his life. he was a inspirational leader to the entire nat...
^
Line 3, column 607, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s life. he was a inspirational leader to the entire nation India. he influenced ...
^^
Line 3, column 635, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...al leader to the entire nation India. he influenced me to aspire to become a sci...
^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
... me to aspire to become a scientist. secondly, the key innovations in any field were ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... which was done earlier in that field. for example the first generation of compute...
^^^
Line 6, column 61, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t generation of computer was with a huge
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 12.4196629213 16% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 58.6224719101 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 2235.4752809 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 224.0 442.535393258 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17857142857 5.05705443957 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25410602084 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598214285714 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 704.065955056 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.082382271 60.3974514979 224% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.0 118.986275619 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 23.4991977007 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.25 5.21951772744 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165190462853 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0773994690768 0.0831039109588 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0720750325687 0.0758088955206 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115318705695 0.150359130593 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812937022034 0.0667264976115 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.38706741573 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.