There has been many speculations about how a novice person in any field is more responsible and exuberant towards their work in comparison to someone who is an expert of that field. People have always been intrigued to analyze that the fact that why this kind of behaviour is so prominent in work. Needless to say, i completely concord with the claim that beginner are more amiable and gives contribution in their work.
Despite of the circumstances, and lack of cognizance about their work beginners are always ready with the smile in their face to help their clients.In other words, drive and passion to fulfill their dreams are very fresh which helps them to be more focused and tackle any obstacles that comes along their way. For example, if you need more information about certain things, than an intern is more nimble to go through all process that you need to fullfill or is required in order to seal the deal rather than a senior of that office.
Most of the time, expert of the field are are pompous and petulant which would definitely give an uncongenial vibe to their clients.They have had gone through all of the hurdles during early phases of their career so they are quite often indolent. We all are wary about the fact that with new energy and youth in any field new ideas and contributions are made. For instances, with the development of modern technology and internet their hand todays youth are more creative and hence more participation in the work.
Moreover, sometimes beginner needs more knowledge about certain situation to get more adapted in that particular field so they need to put more effort in their work. As, the youngsters are the future of the world they need have to be more heedful for any consequences that would come along their way.
To rebuttal, one who is an intern or beginnner is more likely to make more contribution in comparision to the expert of the field because of their fresh and young drive for the wok.On top of that they also need to be more habituated in their field of work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, so, for example, for instance, kind of, in other words, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 58.6224719101 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1677.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 358.0 442.535393258 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6843575419 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48577143807 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491620111732 0.4932671777 100% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.2703761319 60.3974514979 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.454545455 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5454545455 23.4991977007 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 5.21951772744 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272916609162 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116844366557 0.0831039109588 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0726872032139 0.0758088955206 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177378420053 0.150359130593 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554400235681 0.0667264976115 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.46 12.1639044944 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.