The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Passion in any field encourage oneself to contribute in order to enhance the existing tech or solve the problem's which are likely to be faced by citizen's. Passionate person always tries his/her best to solve the problem not because he in tasked for but because he is more interested to do so. Problem solving is an important skill nowadays measure in every working professional in respective field, which measure how eager a person is to solve problem and how many ways. Idea's don't just arise at any moment, it needs to solve the problem in larger aspect eventually easing at least some amount of citizen's or working professional in their day to day activities.
First is the example of Bill Gates, who was passionate in programming from his teenager age. After using, computer he noticed a flaw in existing operating system, that one need to have knowledge of operating system (OS) in order to use it. He started to some how fix this problem which eventually lead to creation of Windows OS which is totally Graphical User Interface (GUI) based which solved the problem of use but at current time Windows OS has more than 50% of market share.
Second is the example of Linus Torvalds, who was programmer from his teenage. He solved the problem of keeping the track of updates in programming code like who made what change, at what time, whether one should allow the changes or not by inventing the Git program. Git was initially invented for his own OS which had more than 100k contributors and he was unable to track change in code from those contributors. Now almost every organisation's including Microsoft, Apple, Amazon and Meta used Git to track changes in their millions and millions of lines of code.
Third is the example of Elon Musk, who was passionate in solving problems from early age. He faced a problem in life to transfer money from one account to another one which was hectic as we need to visit bank in their working hours and it was not viable for busy people's. This problem forced him to solve by giving rise to PayPal corporation which is an online bank, capable of doing every task of bank via website within few minutes from home. This solution was so impactful that revolutionized the whole bank and finance system across the world.
I do believe that a passionate person can spot even minute problem in existing solution which can disrupt the whole industry. He/she will try hard to resolve the problem some how and will revolutionize the existing solution to withheld the future problems too.
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- Government should place few restrictions on scientific research and development 50
- The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals 58
- Government officials should rely on their own judgement rather than unquestionably carry out the will of the people they serve 50
- Educational institutions should encourage their students to choose fields of study that will prepare them for lucrative careers 58
- Main benefit of the history is to dispel illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times 66
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... solve problem and how many ways. Ideas dont just arise at any moment, it needs to s...
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Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...em OS in order to use it. He started to some how fix this problem which eventually lead ...
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Message: Did you mean 'somehow'?
Suggestion: somehow
...he will try hard to resolve the problem some how and will revolutionize the existing sol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, third, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2081.0 2235.4752809 93% => OK
No of words: 438.0 442.535393258 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75114155251 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50922798045 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520547945205 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 671.4 704.065955056 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9012651982 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.411764706 118.986275619 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7647058824 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 5.21951772744 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104367011038 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404533485455 0.0831039109588 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432772888535 0.0758088955206 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0561119947084 0.150359130593 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297520799815 0.0667264976115 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.8971910112 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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