The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
The world that we live in has evolved from a cloud of gas and molten rocks to the blue planet, thriving with life, that it is today. Life, as we know it, is a result of billions of years of perfection of natural phenomenon, that by no means is a simple process. What better way to come up with inspirational new ideas than to observe our diverse and complex world, and build upon what nature has already perfected?
Some of the most important innovations of our time are a result of mimicking nature. One of the most significant examples is the aircraft invented by the Wright brothers who took inspiration from the wings of bird. By carefully observing how birds use their wings to generate lift, they were able to design an aircraft based on the same principles. Several other inventions such as velcro and kevlar are also a built upon our observation of nature. This only goes to show that just looking at our surroundings in a different light can spark wonderful ideas.
In addition to engineering, some of the greatest breakthroughs in the field of artificial intelligence (AI) are based on replicating the process by which the brain functions. Neural networks, that are designed similar to neurons in the brain, are the reason for state of the art results in image recognition, language translation, speech recognition, etc. While trying to design artificially intelligent machines, it is evident that evolution has done a spectacular job designing our brain and the best way forward is to understand how the brain works.
Nature has left its mark on many fields other that science and technology. Numerous fighting styles in kung fu, which is considered to be one of the best martial art forms, are based on the postures of animals. These forms, such as the tiger, snake and crane represent ferocity, speed, and balance which are essential traits for a martial artist. Several painters, artists, and musicians find inspiration in nature and their surroundings. The beauty that we find in this comples world of ours is unparalleled and have led to some of the most awe-inspiring works of art.
We can not only innovate, but also gain true wisdom by understanding our surroundings. We have progressed from a time of believing that the earth was flat to understanding the origins of our universe. Breakthroughs in physics, from Archimedes’ principle to String theory and Quantum physics are a result of careful observation of our surrounding. This has allowed us to gain deeper understanding into how our universe works and why things are the way they are.
Some of the greatest ideas have been born because people were passionate in understanding how the world works. Humans are a resultant of millions of years of evolution, and it is only reasonable to believe that our planet, which gave rise to mankind, is infinitely more complex than we can possibly imagine. Our world is an excellent source of motivation and ideas through which any field, be it arts, science or technology, can definetely prosper.
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- Although innovations such as video, computers, and the Internet seem to offer schools improved methods for instructing students, these technologies all too often distract from real learning. 50
- When old buildings stand on ground that modern planners feel could be better used for modern purposes, modern development should be given precedence over the preservation of historic buildings. 50
- The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things. 16
- Critical judgment of work in any given field has little value unless it comes from someone who is an expert in that field. 50
- A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college. 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 261, Rule ID: STATE_OF_THE_ART[1]
Message: Did you mean 'state-of-the-art'?
Suggestion: state-of-the-art
...eurons in the brain, are the reason for state of the art results in image recognition, language ...
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Line 11, column 287, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...ind, is infinitely more complex than we can possibly imagine. Our world is an excellent sour...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 19.5258426966 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 33.0505617978 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 58.6224719101 130% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2520.0 2235.4752809 113% => OK
No of words: 509.0 442.535393258 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95088408644 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74984508646 4.55969084622 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91025610408 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 215.323595506 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522593320236 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 780.3 704.065955056 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.740449438202 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 23.0359550562 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0738990404 60.3974514979 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 109.565217391 118.986275619 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1304347826 23.4991977007 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26086956522 5.21951772744 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.2758426966 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0716667844195 0.243740707755 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0205613282827 0.0831039109588 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283904103064 0.0758088955206 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374752150483 0.150359130593 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194609825254 0.0667264976115 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.8420337079 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 100.480337079 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.2143820225 96% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.