The best leaders are those who encourage feedback from the people whom they lead.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Successful leaders can take criticism and apply it to themselves to improve.
In order to improve, one must be able to accept feedback from those around them to know what they are doing wrong. Nothing can be done by oneself, and having multiple opinions only helps to improve on ideas. If one is not cooperative, or refuses to listen to teammates and piers, they will spread conflict amongst those whom they are working with, butting heads and insisting upon one way. They will not learn from others, since they refuse to hear others.
Accepting feedback from followers, opponents, and piers, not only leads to self improvement, but also builds credibility and relationships. One great example of a modern day leader that does this is entrepreneur Phillip Defranco. He started off as a small YouTuber and has, over the years, built an entire news team and startup business around covering news. He has taken much feedback from his audience, often encouraging them to leave a comment telling him how to improve. This builds connectivity with his audience to the point where most of his viewer trust him and often interact with him. His endorsements of any product holds high value to his viewers due to a greater sense of honesty and a more personal relationship with his audience and his advertisements are much more successful as a consequence. Unlike other youtubers, his willingness to engage and improve from audience feedback leads to a strong connection with his viewers and builds trust by sheer word of mouth. He is one of the few social media figures that has avoided a majority of scandals from reputation.
Of course there are world leaders who do not encourage much feedback or even go as far as to censor criticism. This is common in many dictator-like governments, but whether these government heads are "best" leaders is debatable. The leader of South Korea, for example censors all types of criticism and does not treat his people well. From accounts of excapees from his rule, he will execute any he deems treasonous. This leads to mass fear, which is good for absolute rule, but also provokes immense dislike from his people, many of whom want to flee the area. His doubtful reputation precedes him and even causes worry in the western politics when people hear of him testing weapons of war. Through general censorship and an attitude stubborn to change and improved conditions for his people, underlying seeds of distrust are sown in people's perception of him. Many will agree that his is not the most ideal leader.
Leaders that take feedback improve themselves faster, build stronger connections with their people, and ultimate encourage a better reputation for themselves. They are the leaders that people will most likely support.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: DOES_NP_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'be'?
Suggestion: be
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as to, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 14.8657303371 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 58.6224719101 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2316.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02386117137 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6767034514 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548806941432 0.4932671777 111% => OK
syllable_count: 704.7 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 1.77640449438 394% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.2370786517 114% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2821335527 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.695652174 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0434782609 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.34782608696 5.21951772744 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183745230171 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578411374962 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352571651139 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111491372426 0.150359130593 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386906592573 0.0667264976115 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 48.8420337079 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.