Different people have different opinion about different things. If such people come together and put there own viewpoint in the discussion, this give rise to an argument. The argument never wield itself, just like the gun never kill people, but it is the people who kill people with guns. If such an argument end up by convincing the person with opposite viewpoint, then it is considered to be a great triumph.
Communication plays a vital role in conveying your point of view to others. It is very important to focus more on how you put your point rather than what you want to point. The same thing can be said in many different ways. You should choose your word wisely based on your targeted audience. For example, if you want make a sell of the pen to a writer, then you just have to tell him how fast the pen is, but if you want to sell the same pen to a penman, then you should more focus on how beautifully he can write. In this way, your communication come into picture and help you out.
But people are opinionated about some very sensitive topics of the society and are not in the willingness to change their viewpoint. In such cases, it is very difficult to convince, rather the people are not in the condition to even listen to the other aspect of the topic. Consider for example, religion, people do not want to listen any wrong thing about the practices they are doing in the name of religion. They do not want to know the other side of the coin. In such cases, it is useless to jump into such argument.
There are some people who are professionally trained to convince other with their viewpoint.For example lawyers worked hard to collect the evidences to prove their points, there are psychologist who can play with your mind to change our viewpoint. They are paid to prove their point.
But not all the people who argued are professionally trained or good at communication. They just have an opinion which they want to prove. If you are such a person, then try to find out the reason that give birth to your opinion. For example, you think that the sky is blue but another person might think that the sky is black. In this case, you both are right, but you must convince the other person that you are talking about the sky color in day and he is arguing about the color of the sky in the night. In this way, you can convince the person and win the argument.
In summary, I should said that if you want to win the argument by convincing other with an opposite viewpoint, you should find out the reason that create the viewpoint and then choose your word wisely to put your point.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'their own'?
Suggestion: their own
...s. If such people come together and put there own viewpoint in the discussion, this give ...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...to point. The same thing can be said in many different ways. You should choose your word wisel...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
... to convince other with their viewpoint.For example lawyers worked hard to collect ...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'psychologists'?
Suggestion: psychologists
...dences to prove their points, there are psychologist who can play with your mind to change o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt. They are paid to prove their point. But not all the people who argued are pr...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nce the person and win the argument. In summary, I should said that if you want...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, for example, in summary, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2135.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 479.0 442.535393258 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45720250522 5.05705443957 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3643206735 2.79657885939 85% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402922755741 0.4932671777 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 652.5 704.065955056 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 6.24550561798 224% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.77640449438 281% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.2370786517 119% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.6396251626 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9583333333 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9583333333 23.4991977007 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.21951772744 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 5.13820224719 136% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304053066232 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857261438402 0.0831039109588 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761876696471 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169372042533 0.150359130593 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856036059427 0.0667264976115 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 14.1392134831 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 48.8420337079 141% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 12.1743820225 68% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 12.1639044944 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 8.38706741573 79% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 100.480337079 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.