Our decision, in every walks of our life, decides our future. Even though we do make a decision then also we are making the decision of staying the same. Judgement of the decision, whether it is good or bad, is based on the outcome of it.
While taking the decision, a plethora of parameters are taken into consideration such as time, need, condition, emotional and pragmatic aspect and so on, contribute in placing a decision. Time is considered to be the most vital factor that can affect the gist of the decision. For example, if a student take a decision of studying after he failed in the examination will proved to be fruitless as the right time for it is already passed.Thus time is very precious part of life that can also play as immense roll while decision making. Thus, correct decision taken on correct time will be concluded as an ideal one.
Aforementioned, emotional and mind stability is very essential for making a precised decision. Every decision, we take, have both emotional and practical aspects attached to it and the aspect considered will decide the result of the decision. For instance, if a pundit decided to stay at home because he do not want to live his parent alone can ruin his care. Though , he can justify his decision with plenty of logical justifications, but the practical aspect of this decision is less cogent and hence this decision will be considers as poor.
However, emotional aspect have equal value as that of practical aspect, decision taken on the basis of emotions lacks the overall logical perspectives which after realization can impact the value of decision.
In summary, your decision will impact your life and hence make a decision with consideration of all the factors needed to its success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... walks of our life, decides our future. Even though we do make a decision then also we are ...
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...he most vital factor that can affect the gist of the decision. For example, if a ...
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Suggestion: prove
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Suggestion: Thus
...the right time for it is already passed.Thus time is very precious part of life that...
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Suggestion: Thus,
...the right time for it is already passed.Thus time is very precious part of life that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 33.0505617978 73% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 58.6224719101 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 2235.4752809 65% => OK
No of words: 299.0 442.535393258 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84949832776 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72077603309 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2804788251 60.3974514979 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.538461538 118.986275619 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 23.4991977007 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 5.21951772744 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289728169494 0.243740707755 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106961724538 0.0831039109588 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109215627607 0.0758088955206 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181604878941 0.150359130593 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459750828975 0.0667264976115 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 14.1392134831 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 100.480337079 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.